Reviews for the baby coming! |
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xvcv chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 F RCTV |
CloveLudwig99 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013 good story but you should put it into diffrent paragraphs when diffrent people are speaking and also you should use spell check :) really good though |
flowerchildaecr chapter 1 . 1/12/2013 this is a really good story just a few tips. paragraphs and if you put it new line for new speak then its easy to find where you are when your reading it |