Yehey !

I can see you improved your grammar skills _

The story has gotten more interesting and I like it how you improved your grammar

Have a nice day and keep it up

Update and please do fix your grammars so that I could easily understand what you mean. Thanks

the song is obviously Interviewer

i like this story's plot. But, may I ask, why are you always add the '_' symbol after the person talking?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D The song is "interviewer" of Megurine Luka, right? and the person who was in the shrine, I think I know who that person is... with those pair of eyes :]

I think it was great, and it gets more mysterious by the chapter lol I loved it!

Such a beautiful story so far! :D