I was listening to the "Drunken Whaler" when I was reading this chapter, what a coincidence...

This fanfiction is absolutely incredible please bring it back!

I finished both games in high chaos. I just killed anyone standing in my way

Great job, shame it wasn't finished.

hi im a writer on another site called Quotev, your story is the first I've written a review for, I love your story and I hope for more wonderful chapters, I thoroughly enjoyed playing Dishonored and I have played the dlc Knife of Dunwall and Grigmore Witches although I haven't beaten either or paid enough attention I probably will now, anyways amazing job with the story and I'll keep an eye out for updates

A social Assassination! Excellent!

Ironically it's proving now that corvo is emily's father so you might want to put an AU or something.

Wait what? No detail into their relationship? Just jumping straight to it? What a shame.

Hey man, I don't want to be that guy but could you like totally make the next chapter. I need this in my life dude, so If ya wouldn't mind dusting off the old keyboard that'd be great.

noice, keep it coming. I wanna see how it ends!

no chapter 19?

Nifty!

I'm still waiting for a godammned update

It has been years since this was posted and is a massive cliff-hanger. WHERE ARE YOU?

This chapter was well written but truly made Corvo look utterly spineless, considering all of his actions in the game and he responds to a man telling him what a naughty boy he is for having a mark, leaving Corvo quaking in his boots. Utter piss, even if you stealth the entire game we know Corvo has balls of steel...you're character practically has a pussy.