Reviews for Black Cloaks, Red Clouds
blood90 chapter 58 . 5/21
rereading this for possibly the 5th time. its still one of my fave fics on the site, possibly 6th best? definitely the best fic where the main character isn't naruto, except maybe dreaming of sunshine...
anyway please update!
Aritee chapter 58 . 4/20
This is such an amazingly and intelligently written story! I'm so impressed with how you've changed the characters and mythology but not in a novelty way. There's real depth here. The politics is strong. The characterisations are justified. You really use the full scope of the Naruto universe.
I know it's been like 3, 4 years since the last update but I'd like to give you some encouragement anyway. To me, this story is up there. It's way up. It's really special. You've clearly put in the hard yards and it shows. This is a work you can be proud of. You've got a hundreds of readers right behind you and we'll wait as long you want because this story is so worth it.
StoriesMakeLife chapter 22 . 10/10/2019
This is an amazing work. Believable politics, intricate plot and a good style of writing. / The only thing I reject is Naruto and Konohamaru raping girls. Yes, they grew up differently in this AU, but I still can't find it believable [unlike all other things in this fic]
Pratik chapter 58 . 10/9/2019
So what exactly is the plan ? Collect all the bijus and cast the infinite tsukyomi and live happily ever after ? That's the plan? Ridiculous absurd and just plain wrong. So fuck off noob writer.
The Hero of Reading chapter 58 . 6/1/2019
Oh my god, OH MY GOD YES! ITS NOT DEAD?! EHEHEHEHSJZISQGSKDKQNDJCJWNDJDLCHCJWK

Ahem, time to reread this!
LrLlak chapter 58 . 3/9/2018
This is quite frankly the most epic Naruto AU of all time. Seriously, you have done an amazing job on this story. Thanks so much for writing it, and please, please, please continue it.
xenosaiyan chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
Holy shit. Thats all i can say.
Lyssasoulless chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
Sorry that this review is on the wrong chapter, mobile makes it difficult.
I have just finished reading all the c chapters uploaded so far and dear god I am really really hoping that there's just been a slightly longer than normal pause between chapters because wow I need more and I need this to be complete.
This is a wonderful story full of all sk kinds of interesting twists and turns and it keeps you on your toes and wanting for more.
This story has been wonderfully crafted and I really hope that it will be ended soon too.
Yume Nijino chapter 1 . 12/7/2017
It's good to see Tenten shine :)
Guest chapter 58 . 11/28/2017
This is such a well written story. I really appreciate how well you write fight scenes and war strategies, granted I have no clue about half of this stuff, but it sounds so legit. Like wow you could actually be a screen writer. I’m wondering how you plan to end this story. There are certain characters im curious about. Like Obito and Kakashi. Kakashi is a product of this universe so does he hold onto the ideology of a Shinobi has to follow the rules to the T? Or did Obito’s death still impact him? Actually now that I think about it did you even mention that Kakashi has the sharingan? What will happen to Kurenai and her son? They can’t go back to the leaf village after all of this
alcfiegen chapter 28 . 11/13/2017
OMG this is some hawwwt romance. loving the drama and story. please keep writing
Furcas chapter 58 . 10/27/2017
I love this fic, I love the world you've built, I love your Tenten (and your Neji, and most of your other characters). It looks like the story is nearing its end, maybe 5 or 10 more chapters to go? Please finish it, this is too good to forever remain one of those unfinished works of art.
Kishoto chapter 3 . 5/5/2017
Holy shit. Mind blown. I was just as fooled as Inoichi.
Deidara chapter 58 . 4/22/2017
Fascinating story. It is worth the time it takes to read every word carefully. I'm hoping to read new chapters as much as I usually am with original works such as the manga themselves.

You've done a wonderful job and I am sure it must have been very hard to build this fanfic to the point where it is now. Seriously, it must have taken a lot of effort. Still, I selfishly hope you will continue this when you can. There is so much potential.

For those who look for high quality fan stories that star side characters in a way that makes them as interesting (or even more interesting!) than the fandom's original protagonists, this should be a delight. Should feedback be proportional to excellence in writing, this would be one of the most famous fanfics in the fandom, in my humble opinion.
RadicalE chapter 58 . 3/25/2017
My first time through the story ended just as Ken was brought back, and upon this complete read through, congratulations. Congratulations on mostly wrapping up all the little details, and not succumbing to the temptation to write more chapters just to write more chapters. Chapter 58 feels like a good close to the story, as there are only three remaining questions: will orichimaru fall, and will amaya get her happy ending? As for Tenten's "choice," sadly Neji has the girls which will trump her own desires, seeing that Tenten has chosen what she sees her duty as over all else over and over. Congrats on a not always fun, but in the end satisfying story. Thank you for your dedication.
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