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The first expectancy, planned or not, is always terrifying.

Your heart races, your mind is everywhere at once, you try and plan the first ten years of their life within the span of 30 minutes to a day.

Well this is going to seem a little odd, but I found myself up very late (possibly catching something) and noticed that I’d either subscribed to the story or just subscribed to the author and thought, “Oh, why the hell not?” Then began reading. (Hey, you know me. I can hit a story and eventually enjoy the whole thing at any angle.) I gotta say a fluff point is where I’m loving things best. The Alderaan nightlight kept making me think “nightlife” or “nighttime” but I got the gist eventually.

What I am super digging is THE TWINS! That’s the mythos of SW I remember being more exposed to back in the day. I remember lots of books on the topic of them in Waldens and B Dalton. Whatever happened to them? Ah, I see. They are right here where they should be. It was rather inspiring to go back in time and think of all this coming to a fine resolution, with Leia calling him “Dad” and expressing the fun of someone bumping into Darth Vader with a cocktail. (I hope you don’t mind me getting random visuals of the Holiday Special when I read the bit of Chewbacca being in a living room.) Shame about Luke, but I could see things changing in the future for him. “...surge of adrenaline and wisp of fear...” that’s grand to say the least! You can expect Anakin to get some kind of tickle out of that considering how far he’s come along in another direction.

The nightlight as a gift? No kidding! That tucks at the heartstrings right there considering the New Hope past! Sheesh! I’m glad she took that so well, tears and all. “Lord Vader, you’re getting too soft and cuddly.” Hey, that’s fine by me. :)

I KNEW NEEDA WAS THE TRAITOR I KNEW IT!

Omg Trooper Karnak is my spirit animal

This is really weird but I actually ship Mothma and Piett XD

This is so far one of the best AU Fan Fiction novels I have ever read, and considering it came from before the prequels. This gave a fresh and amazing turn for what the real backstory could have been- something very different, yet interesting. This deserves to be an official novel for legends in a way. On every step each part of the story is unexpected, and the characters continue to be interesting. The writing of this one is one of the most fluent and artistic stuff I've seen for any amateur, I would love for you to make a continuation of this.

Two thumbs way way up!

Why did you change the only good prequel!?

Awww what's next vader telling luke the birds and the bees, reminiscing about killing 5 year olds, leia slapping vader and nearly braking her hand

I was up till 3AM to finish chapter 14 and read the rest today. Excellent, suspenseful with an interesting AU view. The few errors you mentioned didn't distract me from my enjoyment of your story. Thank you, again.

WAIT! DID LUKE LOSE THE FORCE FOR FOREVER?! PLEASE SAY IT AINT SO! I want closure!

great chapter! i always wondered about darth pov

God damn I hate Palpatine... Why can't the bastard just stay dead? And fuck do I feel bed for Vader at this moment, especially with him being one of my favorite fictional Characters. I love this story and I hate that you're making me feel all these feelings. Just keep doing your thing and being awesome, I really want to read more of it.

Is this fanfiction still in progress? Please continue it, I don't care if it's not canon, I NEED to know what will happen!
Oh and I thought Needa was dead before the battle of Endor, so I'd like to know what happened actually XD