"It is For me! Me Winter, You Pan-boy" that line was funny.

Also a retina and finger print scans to access a room for a pirate great touch.

You my friend are a mad genius.

Oh I am enjoying this I like the idea of Jamie being Peter Pan he's always been one of my favorites. Can't wait to see where this goes. Love stories where Jack and Jamie have a brother like bond. Keep it up this is really unique and downright rockin!

The story is really coming along nicely. a good plot and a new twist for the legend ad tale of what we know. keep up the good work.

So the story of Peter Pan is born and a new story unfolds. I like how it is so far even if I did not see the movie. I can not wait to read the rest.

*can't stop laughing*

Jack is going to meet Puck? Awesome! I can't wait to read that! And of course that's what their idea of "Supplies" is... Then again... I'm not one to talk...

Anyway, great chapter! (as always!)

Damn you are totally oh fire. You are making me look bad. Okay now that I ranted I'll actually say something useful.

Loved the setting at the north pole who doesn't love a good scene with Santa.

Jamie...is...Peter...PAAAAANNNN! I LOVE THIS! And there's gonna be 5 more immortals? My face - (O.O) - I'm in love. Please, update this story soon! Are you choosing the immortals from fanfic? If so, I'd like to be one! If not and you're either: A) Picking your friends or B) writing random people from you imagination, then I'd STILL Love this story! Update soon! *My EMOTIONS ARE GOING CRAZY! I LOVE THIS! :')*

XD oh god, that last part- *bursts out laughing*

But seriously, well done! This is awesome!

And you added in Eris. Nice touch. Discord. I know I've heard the name Eris in Greek Mythology and she is the goddess of... *checks* Strife, discord and rivalry. Surely enough. Smart.

:) keep updating!

I loved the line "The Mermaids have discovered that you are here, and would like nothing better than to seduce you two."

Which of course shouldn't come as too big of a surprise to you since you have been reading my story for months now.

FREAKING YES!

"No, I still Don't want to grow up" classic line loved it.