Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Molina was kidnapped

You don’t call Atem Yugi it’s a thing in the fandom is Atem or Yami or Yami Yugi, not Yugi

Okay, so Harry has one of three red eyes, understandable, but to have one of four blue eyes when Kiaba has all four (even if one is destroyed) you’ll need to explain that one two me, as I’m really confused now.

Love the story but a little sad the whole chapter was just his cards

revive and update this please

ahah I have Avatar and Ra in my mainb deck too :'D

i love this story! 3

i love this story! 3

This would be more believeable if you showed the Globlins view of things and how they try to find where Harry went since it's in their bank a highly valued customer vanished before leaving the doors.

Since it happened in their bank that means it effects the goblin nation as well as the Wizard world they cannot just ignore it.

Too wordy. It could've started better at the "You see it all started with a mouse...I mean Voldermort!" Sorry I got Walt Disney Mousketeer club confused! :)

Your story could've been less wordy and more to the point which actually begins with "You See it all started..." and anything before that is mumbo jumbo.

Most readers are too *kind* and don't call it out as they don't want to get chewed out OR they don't know good english which is the case for this and the last modern generations that failed in school.

I want to see you again! Please update!

Is the hiatus permanent?

I like this story, but overall you put to much on the table. Harry learned to much in the beginning, so now it feels like a lot of the story is given away.

Also, why make up some milenium item, if I recall correctly not all milenium items had bearers in the current timeline

Holy shit dude Harry just told Atem his name! No he can't the whole story is based on Atem's name,since it's the trigger to Atem's full memories and power to summon the light God. And Harry just to him!