Typo right off the bat”

“Harry’s aunt Petunia and uncle Vernon often forced Harry do...”
Should be:
Harry’s aunt Petunia and uncle Vernon often forced Harry to do...”

There were actually three or so other ones, but I’m sorry, I’m multi tasking atm, so I couldn’t really keep track.

Aside from that, very solid chapter. I am eager to see if Harry follows Snape’s warning.

Two typos off the bat.
“Bulistrode” is wrong.

And near the end you say:
“...your internal struggles will NOT to bring harm to Slytherin”
That sentence does not make sense. Either “will not bring harm to Slytherin house” or “are not to bring harm to Slytherin house” either of those work.

Aside from that, a fun first chapter. The first two years of this series seem much too short for my liking, since I am sceptical as to whether or not you can accomplish enough to keep readers interested in that amount of words, but this is a good start. Pansy is rather curious, if nothing else.

All the best,
ACI100

I read everything in one go, the changes are fun and the plot changed, but it was still the same adventure we remember. To be honest I think Harry was stupid in canon for going across traps to ‘protect’ something warded by accomplishes witches and wizards. I’m pretty sure they’re not that incompetent, plus I doubt Quirrel would’ve been able to get the stone from the mirror regardless if anyone tried to stop him. I think it was sweet that Harry went in this time because we wanted to prove Snape’s innocence, it’s always nice to remember those first few years. Thanks for taking the time to write this!

Dumbledore and Trump seem similar in personality.

This is all a 1:1 ratio of canon. What gives?

"What's 9 and 3/4ths suppose to mean anyways?" Poor Harry not knowing fractions. If he knew basic fractions he would know that 3/4ths means most of the way to 10.

I bet that it isn't Vernon and Petunia coming upstairs and is instead Draco and Lucius. As it's late enough here, I'll find out tomorrow when I begin reading their second year. Thanks for sharing such a marvelous fic and undoubtedly a great series in it's intiredity.

This is really great!

Honestly am not fond of Dumbledore in general. He always relied on Harry to defeat Voldemort and yet was always avoiding getting straight to the point

A fun and interesting story.

er...so now, because of Dumbles manipulations, Harry's desire is to go Dark?

This is brill! can't wait to read the next year's story :)

I really like the story! I think that it's fun seeing Slytherin in a lighter tone. Thank you for writing this!

Cute story

Intriguing first chapter.