Reviews for Numb Beneath Your Tongue |
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closeto30 chapter 1 . 8/12/2015 God your writing makes my eyes cross because it's just so intensely good! |
BeachgalNY chapter 1 . 3/16/2013 Lines like this: "she knows if she lets it go, gives over to him completely, she'll snap in half and she wants it, she wants it so badly, but it's so hard for her to be so passive, to let him do all the work, to just give over." are what pushes this beyond PWP and into something truly beautiful and full of depth. Thanks for that! |
eyrianone chapter 1 . 11/5/2012 This is just a beautiful scene between established lovers. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 Please write another chapter about Beckett making Castle RELAX. ;) |
ER-Freaky chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 love it :) |
naybaybay chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 "Do you write best sellers with those puns Mr. Castle?" Hahaha - brilliant! :D |
Austcastlefan chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 Is it just me or is the implication that she did this to herself before him just so... um... hot! (for lack of a better vocabulary). Super hot even. Oh Castle, so cocky (pun intended)! Well done, as always. |
3rdfah chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 And you know, given that last comment about the handcuffs, that this is just about what is going on out of our sight. As usual, nicely erotic, yet perfectly in character! |
Love2readaway chapter 1 . 11/4/2012 Ho, ho... Uhm... Wow! |
pkl chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 Uh. Yes. Ahem. Okay. I think my last braincell left me. All I can say, now that was beyond hot! Uh. |
Deb838 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 That was hot, & sexy |
LoveJessieLou chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 Gah, so hot. So very, very hot. Fuck. |
MUFFY chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 God.. why is everything you write is just so... BIG FAN here! Well if we cannot see it on the TV ( I know it is not HBO but give me something besides a dark out kiss in the bedroom) * sigh* at least I get it here! |
lv2bnsb1 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 Good job! I like the "my turn, now your turn" aspect. Super sexy yet still cute. |
lietomebaby chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 You, my dear, are just too Damn Good! |