Ok, I’ve picked up on something you do. You like to rehash and insert unneeded inner thoughts. Taking 1-2 paragraphs to write out alternate character monologue. I caught myself skipping paragraphs in order to read the story. But I’m quitting. Stephanie Meyer only used another characters perspective when Bella was incapacitated. You’ve basically tried to squish midnight sun and twilight together. It’s not fun, but irritating to read both perspectives of the SAME SCENE. It’s a shame, cause if you didn’t do this I would like it.

I like the emotion and thinking process of Jasper and Bella...

i love a good Jasper/Bella fic, but dont get invested with these character's specifically, the sequal hasn't been update since 2013 and is not complete.

If anyone were to blame for what happened it was Eddie the idiot and his bitch sister R for being the drama queen he is and her oh so smug phone call.

I have been binge reading this story and I have loved it though I really didn't need ANOTHER reason to hate Rose it's been an amazing story and I am going to binge read the rest of it now :)

I'm a little late to the Twilight party, but I'm immensely enjoying fanfic about Carlisle and Jasper as they make the story for me.

This story...I'm not even sure where to begin. I have run the gamut of frustration, sadness, happiness, confusion...and probably more in between. Jasper's constant and never-ending self-deprecation got on my nerves, BUT haven't we all known people like that? And him and Bella refusing to communicate there for a while - ugh! I wanted to strangle them...but again...we've all known people like this. While a little repetitive, their behaviors were SO typical of humans. (I suppose Jasper would chuckle at that.)

While the writing style was somewhat unique, I followed it easily enough. I'm not a fan of stories from only one person's point of view, anyway - there's so much missing. There's a time for it, but I prefer to know most of what's going on.

But the actual writing? This is the type story that inspires MY writing. This is the type story that I come back to for examples...especially of expressing emotion (not my strong suit when writing). These characters were so thoroughly described that I felt like I was in their heads WITH them, if that makes sense. Their physical actions - their touches - I could almost feel. I can't praise it enough, really.

And you've made me want to go find a broken down, deserted carnival. Like, right now. ;)

I see there is a part two but that it hasn't been updated in a long time. I'm hesitant to continue to it because it would be just AWFUL for such a wonderfully beautiful story to be abandoned. Please tell me it's not.

Awesome story! Great writing, and very beautiful. Thank you !

Ok, this chapter was hard to read. Jasper's breakdown was palpable. I hate Rose!

I know this story is complete. I just thought this was a great Bella/Jasper date.

I have loved this story up until this chapter and honestly I don't know if I can keep reading it. I know you all finished it a long time ago but I am so mad right now. And then you're going to bring Maria into it?! Really?! I think I may be done. I really do understand that life isn't all sunshine and rainbows but damn! They have already been through enough with more to be expected from the newborns and now you go and rip them apart at the seams? I don't think I can handle the heart break.

Just found your story, wow oh wow, 3 chapters in & I'm crying already.

I get that things have to progress in their own time, but are they ever going to talk about Bella being turned.

Realmente, esa historia trata con sentimentos muy profundos, toca nuestra alma al leerla...gracias por tan increible romance.

A cada dia amo mas esa historia... me estoy enamorando de su version de Jasper... Eres una exelente escritora, felicidades... seguire leendo

Amazing! The best sex scene ever. That is how it's supposed to be written, not just hot and dirty. Emotional, honest, realistic and absolutely outstanding! Love your entire story