AHHH THE ENDING! Everything was sooooo cute!

Honestly, this was one of the cutest fanfictions that I have ever read. I love it and I will definitely be reading it again in the near future. Lalu is one of my favorite ships so I was squealing a lot whilst reading it.

I feel like Mira, so overjoyed I could faint from happiness. I kid you not, my face hurts from grinning well reading this small story.
Love it sooo much!

Awwww. They liiiiiiike eachother! So damn cute.

Oh my god, that is absolutely adorable! And I love how Laxus just beams at Makarov's approval, never even denying a Fairy Tail wedding or what Juvia would expect to be 30 adorable blonde babies XD

NO EVERGREEN ISNT!
Sorry I'm just a big evergreen fan!

I demand more for this fanfic has left me happy and with a hole In my heart!

Aww so adorable. What kinda confuses me is that no author I've seen takes advantage of Laxus's motion sickness. It really humanizes him (and makes him less powerful, like it did with Natsu) and it allows the cute scene of Lucy helping said dragon slayer get through the train ride. -

omg so cute. I'm fangirling! I love it I need a sequel please!

Love it. Thanks for the awesome chapter. Would please write more?

I love this chapter. Thank you so much for the fun story.

This was such a cute story! You seemed to have a good grasp of characterization and plot development! In the future, I would just suggest you re read your story a few times to catch typos.

Those little moments with Laxus obviously showing that he found her attractive like when she held his arm and he got goosebumps and when he gave he the coat was just precious. I loved it so much. You have every right to be proud of this story! It is wonderful! Evergreen and Lucy getting into small cat fights was also adorable. I love the way you described the Thunder Tribe as human and not overbearing like some others that I've read. It was my pleasure reading your story. .

please make more stories..

Its good. Please add a bonus chapter