This is interesting. Odd how I found this despite it being created in 2012.

I feel like there's more to the whole thing, in terms of backstory. They seemed cursed, the Thirteen, and why is it so particularly special that Roxas needs to find his soulmate? They're all in on it. The past of what happened years ago has yet to be explained. Did they all die for their sins? Are they really dead, or just turned into demons? Or are their souls turned into demons after death? Until they regain their hearts and be whole again.

I feel Naminè is part of their salvation, but her refusal to love Roxas is holding everything back because it's their mutual love that can save them. They see each other, their true selves, as they remember them to be. That has to have significance.

Go for it I love this so far

This is also great! I didn't even notice that it was much more longer than the first part.. I enjoyed reading this.. I hope in the third part that there was more RokuNami.. hahah.. Forgive me for wanting romance in horror stories.. xD Now I'm curious where the third part is.. T.T I really hope that you will still write that.. :3

she actually killed sora... i was not expecting that at all :o that was amazing and terrifying all at once!

Oooh, this was just as good as the first one, love the whole carousel theme - reminded me a lot of silent hill and their twisted world. And strangely enough, Roxas was really adorable with his love for Namine. :3

This Carnival of Rust series really do catch me. :)
It isn't scary at all, (for me i don't know how the others reader think about it) but i love the feels 3
I enjoyed every moment of the story and can understand every feeling.
Ohhh and that rabbit doll! I just love how that doll held so much.
I know Naminé won't forgive Roxas but she actually loves him. Being the gentle and tender boy he was...
Ahhhh this story is truly wonderful

I HOPE THERES A Carnival of Rust 3 OR A NEW CHAPTER! Very well written and this concept is just so, unique. I love it! Update/ make new story soon!

God yes a part 3 would be amazing I would love it and maybe namine owl finally love roads a little bit

Ooh, I SO love Carnival of Rust! I saw the picture on Deviant Art and just had to read it. Better than I thought. Much, MUCH better. Can there be a three soon?

That was absolutely AMAZING. And I'm picky. I've been reading through a lot of your other stories and I really enjoy your writing style! I flipped out when Namine announced Xion as being her 'new doll' lol. I saw that you missed this Halloween for the part 3 update but please update anyways! Also Namixas ftw

oh my goodness I'm waiting for the part 3 OTL

...oh...I just reviewed number 1. asking for a third...
So I ask thee twice. WRITE A THIRD PART.
please...with voodoo doll on top?

I'm now looking forward to this Halloween oh my goodness.

Oh my gosh this was amazing :O I am sooo hooked on this story when Namine when will u love Roxas! T-T the feels I get from this story are increadible! Gahhhh!I love it :3 I sooooo can't wait for the next chapter. I so look foward to this halloween :3 X3 :D :) the feeelllllsss!.

Oh my god! This one was freaked me off more than the first one! Honestly, Kiome you're sadist! Ehm, anyway, yeah the romance was only a dash here- and hurt. Anyway hope the trilogy has more the romance!