Lulu is by far the cutest of all.
Ah, I'll miss the Pouncepaws

Cute! I feel a bit sorry for Edmund, that must've hurt.
I smiled at each bite, though

So finally Susan knows what her siblings feel when she scolds them about proper etiquette and so. Peter and Edmund would love to know this.

Love it! The 'nfernal nuisance can be quite adorable

And considering I have slept with a kitty-cat before I know what Edmund feels, minus the biting though for me. My Elle is mostly well behaved, except for when she isn't. And the talking, of course. And I wish for Nthteenth-millionth-time that this world had talking animals...

Aw! I think Edmund (the king) might have been like this when he was young too...

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Yep, that's a kitten all right. And I should know, because I have one...

'And I put your dessert forks in the right place, too.'? That 1 made me laugh...

In the fabulous elecktrum's universe, there's a little fox kit also named Peter, called Peterkins 4 short (though I don't know why; Peterkins is longer) and he's also quite cute... 2 tell the truth, I'm not surprised that elecktrum is on your favorite authors list...

Honestly, I may have liked this one the best. Lucy was always so sweet and innocent, at least compared to the others. I mean, she wasn't an idiot, just innocent. And Lulu is about the sweetest of the four Pouncepaw siblings. :)

"Ablutions"...such archaic language. :)

Excellent, wonderful chapter.

"...if anyone wants to read it." Srsly? SrSLY?! Of COURSE we'd want to read it!

By the way...I know Peter has the Tigers, and Edmund has the Wolves...who are Susan and Lucy's personal bodyguards?

I was waiting for that one last bite...you didn't disappoint. :)

But poor Edmund...cat bits hurt like the dickens. :/ Eddie seems a bit more of a "troublemaker" than his other two siblings. But this is understandable.

Excellent chapter.

I'll answer your question first. :Yes, yes you should. Although, I seem to recall that you have.

Haha, how did their parents know what to name the kittens? I mean, how did they know that the kittens personalities would so closely match the Sovereigns' personalities? Well, the first two at least...

Poor Susan...shown up by a cat. :) Ironic about the ancient book. I think the Franks only left England in the late 1890's, yet arrived at the beginning of Narnia, which I must assume is now well in the past. Like, centuries in the past, if not longer.

I wish I knew more about the geography of the world Narnia is located in...I mean, I've seen some vague maps in the past, but nothing overly detailed.

At the beginning, I was thinking "While I nodded, nearly napping" when Peter started to doze off. And it must be difficult for kids to have to put up with all that responsibility and security.

Petie reminds me of a Narnian cat version of Billy from "Family Circus". :)

This is cute. And good idea to use a cat as a tactical advisor.

Excellent first chapter. You have written Petie acting as a little child would act extremely well.

This was a joy to read. I love this little cats and how they mirror their namesakes! :)

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