Reviews for Coming Undone
writeallnight chapter 11 . 8/21
I love this turn of events! Stiles as the alpha?! I feel like he totally deserves it. Lydia is right. He's Stiles. Such a fabulous fic!
writeallnight chapter 10 . 8/21
Woohoo! Go Stiles! Wow. He really took care of business! "Yeah, big guy, my pack." Such a freaking Stiles line. Love it!
writeallnight chapter 9 . 8/21
I KNEW IT! I KNEW GERARD WAS STILL A FREAKING BADDIE! Gosh I feel so vindicated right now! I can totally see why this is your favorite chapter so far because it is amazing! You wrote Stiles so beautifully. I felt all the complex emotions he was dealing with when he saw Peter, when Gerard made him dose Peter, when he had to decide whether or not to tell the pack...it's so amazing!
writeallnight chapter 8 . 8/20
I KNEW SOMETHING HINKY WAS GOING ON WITH THE ARGENTS! Gosh I am SO invested in whatever Stiles does next. Will he break Peter out? Will he leave him there because he deserves it? Was Peter responsible for the Sheriff's accident, or was it someone else? SO MANY QUESTIONS!
writeallnight chapter 7 . 8/20
This Allison/Stiles dynamic is so interesting! I'm feeling suspicious about Gerard...was he somehow involved in the accident?! Love Scott and Derek freaking out about Stiles' statement about dying in the trunk. They are such good friends!
writeallnight chapter 6 . 8/20
This chapter is so sweet! I love everyone taking care of Stiles and making sure he's supported and loved through this terrible incident. Interesting thoughts from Derek at the end! I'm fascinated with his and Stiles' relationship in this fic.
writeallnight chapter 5 . 8/19
This chapter was a WILD ride. I love that Chris has basically the same attitude toward Stiles as Derek which is...No. Just no. To anything Stiles. I approve, Stiles is NOT ready for a gun, no matter how much he thinks he is. I think I was as surprised as Stiles about Lydia's visit and werewolf situation. And then another surprise with the Sheriff gone missing and now injured. Hope he's all right!
writeallnight chapter 4 . 8/19
Lol to the Sheriff being like yeah...no I'm definitely not buying you a gun...Also the Derek and Stiles exchange is sooooo perfect! You strike an excellent balance of Derek not having time or patience for Stiles' shenanigans but also can't help wanting to protect him. The exchange between Stiles and Scott at the end is adorable too!
writeallnight chapter 3 . 8/18
Your Derek is so spot on. I love that he knows Stiles well enough to know EXACTLY why he's asking for the bite and that he doesn't truly want it. His snark is amazing and his following Stiles all the way home is perfection. I also really love Stiles going to sleep with his dad. It's so sweet and lovely and shows just how much Stiles is a kid who really needs his father. Beautiful chapter!
writeallnight chapter 2 . 8/18
"...two hundred plus pounds of dark and broody." Oh my gosh, I lost it at that line. I'm still laughing. I love how you make Stiles so Stiles even, when he's hurt/sick and in the hospital. The stuff with his dad at the end is so tender and sweet. I love their relationship and you wrote it so well!
writeallnight chapter 1 . 8/18
I am SO onboard with this. Thank you for grabbing such a spectacular opportunity to whump on sweet little Stiles. Melissa being so sweet and wonderful to him is making my heart swell a million sizes. And when Stiles thought about wanting his mom...legit tears. So excited to read on!
daichimaru chapter 1 . 12/26/2019
3 Loved this chapter, I really like how you write and describe Stiles' experience w/ the whole 'getting left to die in the trunk of a car, did I mention being totally abandoned?' thing.
Kitten chapter 11 . 5/11/2019
I love Teen Wolf. Some stories don’t get stiles’s personality right, but this story captures it perfectly. I love the interactions between him and the rest of the pack. This is probably my fourth time reading through this story and I love it even more each time.
werwolf-yasya chapter 11 . 1/25/2019
Amazing work. Thank author.
vegesan chapter 11 . 10/18/2017
i think i mught have a crush on you after this fanfic, you're amazing, i love you
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