Reviews for The Martyr's Morning
bryn chapter 7 . 5/14
the voices are because Harry is actually in a coma and they are watching iron man in the hospital.

but really

luna always seems to know a lot more than the average person. (pretty sure it’s because she’s a seer of some sort)

i wonder if natalie\natasha\shield knows about Harry...

as for the voices, i personally think that magic gives people a sort of third eye that could earn the of things. and some have more advanced ones!, which is why some (like Luna) are seers.
bryn chapter 6 . 5/14
Luna! i do think she was the best choice for Harry where he is. she has this way of Telling people what they need to know without really flat out telling them what it is they need to know. she also wouldn’t overwhelm Harry and try to ask questions he isn’t ready for yet. hm... maybe she needs to meet Tony...
Jasnrob chapter 1 . 12/4/2019
How did Harry go from no memory in a hospital to having an apartment? Seems a paragraph or two explaining would make it less choppy.
Sparksofrandomness chapter 9 . 7/16/2019
So story abandoned?

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BOSS02109 chapter 9 . 6/17/2019
will harry get his memory back
Crappy chapter 9 . 5/8/2019
Just get it done, it doesn’t matter if it’s crap, just get it done. After you finish it you can edit the crap out of it. At least that’s what I tell myself to do when I am writing fics. Cause the vast majority of people I have seen who have said they are doing a rewrite, without finishing their first story? Never finish anything, wind up losing interest and saying stuff like “this story is Not abandoned, will NEVER be abandoned! Stop saying it’s abandoned!” And then they don’t show up for years. If they show up at all it’s to say they’re not continuing the story. If they even remember to say that at all. Worse is when they leave you hanging on a cliffhanger for fun and then disappear. None of us can guarantee tomorrow. None of us can say what will happen tomorrow. It might be we have a heartattack and die in our sleep in the night. So making guarantees like that is really foolish. All you can do is your best. Try your best, do your best, and be kind.
quillquate chapter 9 . 10/31/2018
thank u for writing a story that isn’t super generic like what makes up 80% of the hp x avengers archive. i’m really enjoying the characters interacrions and i’m absolutely thrilled at the presence of good old luna. hope u continue writing!
KitKatLovesUT chapter 9 . 8/9/2018
CONTINUE YES CONTINUE I CANT TAKE MORE HEARTBREAK I JUST FINISHED THE SEASON 1 FINALE OF CRIMINAL MINDS AND VAME RIGHT TO THIS ONLY TP REALIZE THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER RIGHT NOW SO YES CONTINUE.
bloodysilverfox chapter 9 . 3/25/2018
I am liking the story but I somehow feel like it's missing something. Idk. Keep up the good work though!
MargaritaS chapter 9 . 1/17/2018
i am really curious about the voices and feelings that harry has been having, i hope you continue this story someday as this has been a fantastic set up so far :)
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 5 . 1/9/2018
Thanks for clearing that up. I thought this story was about to be Slash for a few minutes and was about to hang it up.
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 9 . 12/21/2017
The voices... I can only guess that it is intuition, sort of Sight, Trelawney style. They couldn't be just memories, they know sort-of-future of this world too well. Probably see/hear auras of people, maybe even objects. Passive access to magic, Mind Arts kind, not flashy-spells kind?
Harry, thank you. You didn't save George, you couldn't, but at least, you stopped the criminal from killing anybody else.
Stay away from blue? Tesseract, or blue eyes? I hope Luna isn't recommending Harry to stay away from Loki; I don't like Jotun prejudice. Ah, blue stands for sadness, for nightmares?
I have to wonder, will Jarvis have ambulance at stand-by for Tony when he attends the car race? Because Tony is at car race... Harry asking if Tony is in a car wreck... Jarvis is smart.
Agent Coulson? Or who, in black leather?
And yes, I dislike the chapter. If only because it was totally low of Tony to pull secret from Jarvis after Harry asked Jarvis to tell nobody about the nightmares.
But then, Jarvis kept his word to not tell Tony of his own volition; Jarvis didn't, couldn't promise to not answer Tony's questions if Tony answers directly about broken light bulbs, or nightmares, or whatever. Tony is just as concerned about Harry as Harry is about Tony. Even though Tony is very abrasive at that.
Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck.
the-darker-side-of-things chapter 9 . 10/20/2017
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Aidis chapter 9 . 10/1/2017
This was a fun read. Thanks for writing it!
Balty chapter 9 . 8/19/2017
Hello. I just found your fic today and I really enjoyed it. :) I'm looking forward to whenever you decided to update it again. Life gets in the way sometimes... Good luck. I am still wondering about the voices and the gut instincts though. I figure one of them is magic, the other memories. But you could do that either way. :)
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