It made me cry...

sad

* sniff* WHAAAAAAAAA

SEQUAL

:D i loved it its beautiful!

So does that mean the uchiha hid his real emotions behind a mask,please you should continue this in sasukes point of view

Thanks for making me cry, you jerk! *goes and sobs in emo corner* other than making me cry, it was great.

Ever time I read this I feel like crying and laughing all at the same time! This is a great fic :)

nice you added a little bit of bleach into the story, gave it away with the butterfly.

i absolutely love this, my tears wouldn't stop falling. Great job.

AHHHHHH BRII! BRI BRI BRI BRI YOU ARE AH-MAZING! AH-MAZING! THE LAST LINE? AN ORANGE BUTTERFLY FLEW BY HOLLY SHIT! HILY SHIT MY FUCKING FEELS! I LURVE YOUUU

well it was really short but still thanks for writing

you know... I hate you for making me cry... even if your story is awesome.

great story. it was so sad that i nearly cried. i guess that it didn't help that i read it while listening to In the Arms of the Angels. It was perfect in length as well, seeing as it took me the exact length of the song, to read the story. good job

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