Loved it! I liked your Sasuke, being his usual quiet and efficient on the mission but then letting his passion come through ;-)

Really like this! Thank you :-)

Good

Very nice story! I like your writing style, but I had to laugh at "Kyuubi container" and "Dickless" ahahaha.

Ah! That was cute!

So cool! But I think u need more sexual moves like licking, or Sakura sucking Sasukes you know what. Thats all but I like it!

fantastic...love it very much ;)

Wow! Amazing story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for your amazing writing skills! I saw SasuSaku in a different light.

It's funny how Team 7 interacts with each other. :) Sasuke's show off protectiveness troughed* Sakura is a delight to see. It felt like, it was a natural thing for him to be there for her. ;D And the way you ended it with Kakashi giving us the details on Team 7's return was a very good way to finish it up. LOVED the story! ;)

One of the best scenario to conceive Sarada ;)

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I enjoyed everything up until the smut bit. I feel like you got to the bit where they were just about to have sex and then you got put under a time limit? Like it felt really rushed and you didn't really give them time to enjoy each other! Maybe you could have spent more time on them exploring each other's bodies a bit more but other than that I actually love your writing style it's so eloquent! I can't wait to read what else you've done xx

Lol :D love it!

that was satisfying... me likey

Love it! Hahaha