Reviews for Jean
RedJive47 chapter 20 . 7/20
Mjeruuuus…

Where is the rest of the story
bad-addiction chapter 20 . 4/25
I'm really ashamed to not have read this before.

It's such a touching and realistic. There's no perfect person everyone has flaws.
I actually liked when you added that Sarah character. Her motherly personality was something Jean was missing, and now it has been passed to Minerva.

I thought Anna would have more involvement. It was something to have her story included.
It shows that others really have been hurt worse than Hermione, who still has her father at least.

Anyway it's been 5 years since you've last updated. Life changes slot since then and I hope it's been kind to you.
I've actually stalked you, from NEW BLOOD review page.
Always checking reviewers that have written or their fav list. Sometimes you just don't find stories when searching. So thank you for your suggestions and your fav list.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/1
I have read your two chapters, I don't know what the further story entails but I want to give lots of kudos as it's the first ever fiction which I have cried myself in tears non stop. True heart touching lines you got there . _
lazy-kaa chapter 20 . 11/3/2019
Again, it is so unfortunately that very interesting storry frozen. Thanks for hours of nice reading and character development. Hopefully, you will return to your wonderful text.
Noacat chapter 20 . 3/9/2019
I just found this delightful story! It was so wonderful! Thank you so much for writing it. I hope for an update someday, but I completely understand how real life must take precedence over updating a fic.
lithuanthalasa chapter 20 . 8/5/2017
I like the story a good deal, I hope you will continue it.
Laverock chapter 2 . 4/3/2016
Chapter 2, so far, so good. Believable.
V-rcingetorix chapter 20 . 12/21/2015
And the writing stops at a cliffhanger ... disappointing.
Lady Stardust 619 chapter 20 . 12/16/2015
Okay, now I'm scared.
Voldemort / Lucius Malfoy combo super villain?
Poor Draco!
I seriously can't wait for your next chapter!
This is an amazing story.
Glaux Bryonia chapter 20 . 11/11/2015
Very interesting story. I'm curious where you'll take the plot now that the main villain seems to be gone.
Monnbeam chapter 20 . 8/6/2015
I feel sorry for Draco a little but maybe it might help him to think for himself about all the blood nonsense. Loved the chapter and story and looking forward to reading more
Morbious20 chapter 20 . 3/26/2015
Awesome story so far keep up the great writing.
kelbelz chapter 20 . 3/25/2015
I take it the elder Malfoy did some investigating on the young witch that so successfully charmed his son?
Looking forward to more of your story

On past chapters, I found the first few chapters a little off putting, they seemed quite choppy. I realise you were describing an important story event through multiple eyes, but I just found it a bit confusing. Luckily I read on because your story outline had me intrigued.
AnotherSeverusFan chapter 20 . 3/21/2015
I just recently found your story. The plot is unique and I like the development so far! Update soon!
old-crow chapter 20 . 3/16/2015
Hi,

This is one of my favorite stories to catch up with. Your Jean character works so well, but is so very different from the thousands of stories that all feel the same. I did find myself questioning several things in the last few chapters that you might help me with.

In the revival scene where Sirius, Riddle and Lucius came back, why didn't they kill off Riddle and Lucius at the same time? Both were very bad guys and I doubt that anyone in the order would mourn Lucius being put down.

Ginny doesn't appear to be in this story. Did I miss an explanation that she was killed in the chamber of secrets in an earlier chapter, thus allowing for the shade of Tom Riddle?

Related to that, if the sixteen year-old Tom had been reanimated, how would he have known about the rest of the DEs, the Mark and the like? Did I miss that too?

If so, I apologize profusely. There are many downsides of trying to read stories late and night with one eye closes.

All the best as you continue with it. I hope that the words for the next handful of chapters come easily to you.

Old-Crow

In the new year's eve ball scene, I'll admit that I was expecting Hermione to be kidnapped. Your outcome worked just as well.
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