I had kinda hoped that it would take Regina longer to forgive Emma. Even though they love one another sometimes love isn't enough to wipe out a wrong. I don't know I kind of wanted to see Regina have her regular back bone. Not to mention the animosity that not just Emma should have towards the Charmings.

Dude, I'm sorry but this whole fanfic pissed me off. First off, Neal was a total ass in this, he continually chased after Emma even though she told him that she wasn't interested. He used Regina's father's death against her, knowing it would piss her off. Secondly, he acted like the victim in this entire story, and everyone, except Regina, allowed him to. And he never even apologised. Thirdly, Henry and Emma completely disregarded Regina's feelings. And I know Emma apologised, but Henry didn't, because he has this "special plot-shield" that protects him when he's being a little shit. Regina was we'll within her right's to blast him with magic. I'm more surprised that you didn't have her take it a step further. Oh, and lest I forget, fourthly? Emma didn't kick Neal's ass.

I don't know I might be a complete dick, but I feel as though Regina took Emma back to easily. I am one of those people who believe that people who do or commit wrongs should have a tougher time doing things. Because what lesson is learned if the person which behaved badly or disregarded others feelings and emotions, gets their problems resolved quickly?

Haha! Wow! You got my ass again! How in the hell do you manage to keep surprising me?! You write some heartwrencing stuff! But usually when I'm well aquainred with an author they become predictable... Well you are a very different story! Gah! Haha anyway thanks for sharing this! I loved it! I almost cried, but I hoped you would give me a happy ending lol. I guess I should just trust you more

Said this last chapter.
I hate Neal so much right now.

I really don't like him. Not even an ounce right now.

OKAY! It's time to kill Neal

This upset me to no end even though the writing is beautiful i ended up grinding my teeth because i really dislike Neal

It was good, then you made it typical. What a fucking shame. Be fucking original.

Awesome story. Love that Emma finally saw what her hanging out with Neal was doing to Regina

Glad Emma went after Regina! Good girl!
Even better that Neal is leaving!

Great. Absolutely great

My heart broke when Regina was hurting. I might have a mega crush on her character. You are the second ouat writer I've come to read. Nice story. Probably could've been a tad longer but yeah, it served its purpose. Thanks for writing it.

So sweet... :)

Wonderful story, it felt very natural for the characters to react like this and the happy ending was just wonderful