Thats like me when baking so I feel ya but I do not know if I have ADD

This is really amazing, there's only one thing that I would call a problem with this fic. There's a lot of typos scattered throughout, some are one offs, others I've noticed repeats of, the first two can be atributed to a bit of ignorance about the Japanese language (which I do not claim to be an expert in) first, you have them saying aye sensi, I'm really pretty sure you mean hai sensi, next there's the name thing, you do realize that in Japan family name comes before personal name? So Yoshi is his personal name, not his family name. Okay last repeating error I took note of, you keep spelling once as ones. I hope you find this useful, and that you update soon!

This story has a ton of spelling and grammar errors. Splinter seems kinda cruel to Raphaeal because his son is only one years old. Pouring water on a baby is wrong.

aww , i was hoping that Splinter would have a chance at getting his eldest child back from his former friend, i was hoping for him to be able to bond with her , maybe kill the Shredder to stop him from hurting his family anymore. wow it's getting close to 3 am i need to get to sleep , good thing it was a Friday night. cheers.
lol , wow there was a chariture named Kirby in the cartoon that i've seen , he was renting the basement from April , and the shredder had a daughter as well , a few times she thought her father was going to far in trying to get rid of the brothers and stepped in to stop him , other times she's fought for her father.

wow , i'm a christian but was able to read that with a neutral-ish eye , that was pretty good , i'm not going to convert or anything but i think some world history teachers would like to read the bit that Dinnie said ,

ADD? oh do you mean ADHD?
all i have had is the American spring rolls which is very tasty but probably not the same.

i saw the last chapter and got excited , i'll let you know if i'm right about what i'm guessing about the last one.

there was a different back story for Splinter in the cartoon that i watched , he was alway a rat , but he and the turtles all gained some humanity , splinter already had some . he was Yoshi's pet who mimiced his moves to learn , Yoshi could be said to be able to count as Spliner's father since Splinter counted Yoshi as his family . Splinter was able to bring his young son's and his master's ashes to Yoshi's adopted father in Japan.

if you ever go back and write more of this , perhaps you could use time travel to let the turtles meet their step mother.

how old is April in this chapter ?
and please how did you miss life so many times? it's live. i'm sorry but it's just getting nuts.
i looked up the word you used, kunuich and couldnt find what it means

lol at the part of Splinter scaring Raph.
oh yeah i remember spike, he was in only one episode , i forgot the name of Mikey's cat as well , well that brings up memorys from long ago.

i'm sorry but the mistakes are starting to drive me nuts . ' faith seem to play a large part that day ' ? you mean fate. and ones? you mean once , dont you have spell check?
that was really sweet how you had the one on one time for Splinter and each of his sons

the brother's call home the lair , Splinter sometimes called it his burrow , or at lease he did in the slightly older cartoon. i just remembering watching back when i was around 7 , so nearly 10 years ago for when it was on TV

i think you may want to go over your chapters and fix the spelling mistakes .

lost his first family and gained another a few years later.
yes how much trouble can 4 turtles be? the answer: none .. if their normal , a ton if they mutate .