I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. You captured the characters' essence beautifully. Thank you for writing and sharing this.

I know it's been five years and you may not even get this anymore, but I just wanted to thank you. I found your story a few weeks ago after having read Insurgent, and I loved it then. But now that I'm done with Allegiant (which had me crying for hours), I find so much comfort in reading your story again. It mends what need to be mended.
So thank you.

I cannot get over how skillful, sensitive, and beautiful your writing is. So insightful and stunning how you develop their characters and their relationship. Love it!

My first time reading a Divergent story, and I picked a great one! I enjoyed your take on the characters and your storyline. Thank you for sharing!

I respect you writing a sex scene that isn't "the-best-ever," because you're 100% right that it's unrealistic (and effing annoying tbh) that every FF couple has perfect technique and connection. BUT, I am really disappointed in this scene because you've established that Tobias has made her come before and she loves it so him not doing that FIRST, to make sure she has the best experience he can give her, doesn't flow with the story IMO. I agree with the bit about it appearing to make Tobias only interested in his own pleasure and we all know he is definitely NOT like that. But overall, props to you for going against the flow and giving us something real!

I'm reading through your story for the second time! Great work! By far the best fan fic I have encountered for Tris and Four. Thank you for presenting such a great alternative ending to the original series-perfect. :D

Thank you so much for this story. It was amazingly well written and I just found myself getting lost in it as if it were real.

Please continue writing! You have a gift :-)

Soooooo good

This is a great story :)))

They are so deliciously awkward. Love it!

This was amazing. Thank you.

This is awesome

awsome...u did a wonderful job, I liked it more than Veronica Roth's story...this should be end of Divergent series...thank u so much...u made me forget the pangs of Allegiant. Thank u once again :)

This doc was breath taking, thank you so much! I can't wait to read some of your other work

Best chapter ever! I love Christina's comment, amd Tris beimg sneaky. Amd Shauna pregnant! Haha, am loving reading this story. Thank you!