NOOOO! Bad author! Loki never should have lost the baby! Great job, with the pairing, by the way. Tony needed to be a bit OOC.

I have no words to describe how good this story was! Must I start despairing that you have abandonned this story now or is there still an incling of hope somewhere still? You probably moved to something else in your life (which is also all right and understandable) and this review might or might not mean much to you anymore but I still felt like your story at least deserved some mark of appreciation!

I would have liked to see the other Avengers have a bit more of an effect against "The Thing" but I suppose it's only a detail. I didn't feel like Tony was that much OOC though; I personnaly see him as a pretty laidback individual, the kind of person who takes any event in strides and deals with things as they come and to me the evolution of his and loki's relationship felt rather natural. Also loved the fact that their first kiss was tender and not all passion, bite and desperate. I don't necessarily see Loki as a very violent lover as a lot of person do. Guess I could be described as a romantic... I'm not a fan of male pregnancy but the way you broached the subject (albeit shortly) was respectful (no jokes, no fanfare, you didn't throw it in our face big and staring) even though the end result was horrifying. The afterward was all grief, mourning and despair but with no hormonal melodrama which I was thankful for. The line between the two can be thin but you executed it well. So thank you for sharing this with us.

My goshhhh I cry so much please continue! Its brilliant!

Hmn. Poor Loki.

I really like this one. Well written, interesting, entertaining. I'm looking forward to more stories.

Great story ;)

I love this story! Poor Loki and Tony! I so hope they get another chance in your possible series?!

This was an amazing story. I feel really sad for Loki though, loosing another child.
Keep up the brilliant work.
Cheers,
IchigoRenji

That was so lovely to read. I do hope you write more!