Hi, this is really good! The plot was really interesting and I enjoyed reading about Sarah

Shouldn't dooku be punished?
Going against the will of a sentient when there is other options, is not really jedi like, but it makes for interresting time.
I like your time lady.
I hope she befriend the robot and makes things even more difficult for everyone.

I won't read this. Chapters need to be longer.

An amazing story but if possible longer chapters would be amazing

Great story! I can't even count the number of times I laughed out loud as I was reading it!

Dang. I read the whole thing today. I liked it. Personally I liked the earlier chapters with less swearing better, but the story is remarkable. Her attitude reminds me a bit of Sherlock. No once could pretend to be that annoying all the time, so it's really an integral part of her personality. Does the knock-out trick she learned from an old friend happen to be the Vulcan neck-grip by any chance? That's what it seems like. I thought this was really funny. You have a very… what's the word I'm looking for… agreeable sense of humor. Pranks and self-righteous pretension certainly make for a very interesting main character. Never thought I'd see a Time Lord other than the Doctor so willing to rebel against everything they know. Good work, I look forward to the next chapter.

Cass

Wonderful story cannot wait for the next chapter and keep up the wonderful work.

Sincerly the Nutter

Still not believable as a Time Lady. Too much the rebellious, sulking human teenager. It is also more than a little silly to see her version of dark side thoughts here: the darkest thoughts of a Lady of Time should not he so small, so pedestrian. She doesn't seem like the same kind of being as the Doctor, the Master, or the Rani; she feels like a rebellious child.

Will keep reading in the hope this improves.

MOAR

it LIIIIIIIIIVES!
Fantastic chapter ;)
Hope to see another one soon!

Whoa, update!
I loved 'the floor is lava'. Nice way to make a scary situation humorous.

This is awesome! Update, please!

ooooohhhh! Sarah isn't her real name!

Time Lord vs Super Computer? Time Lord wins every time. Seriously. Come on though. Time Lord intelligence allowed them to literally rewrite the laws of the universe. One measly computer significantly less powerful than a TARDIS is no match for the most intelligent species in the multiverse.

Neat. Still waiting for Sarah to bitch-slap the Jedi.