That was very heartfelt! I like how you showed that Bella wasn't always murderous, that she'd been molded to be like that. At the end, were you implying that she left to commit suicide?! Loved it :)

This was highly interesting. I loved it.

This was a very interesting read. There were a few grammatical mistakes, but nothing so bad as to distract me from the overall fic.

I love the vulnerability you gave Bellatrix. She's always so fierce and strong, but you showed us another side and made it real. Though I can't help but think that if Rod ever struck her, she'd probably kill him. Since she didn't love him, there'd be nothing to hold her back. But that's just me!

Overall, it was a lovely fic. You portrayed everything very beautifully.