this is brilliant I could not stop reading, please write more of your storys

Wait so Anakins a vampire? And good jod

The story so far's pretty good. But what I loved the most was how detailed you were.

Brilliant

Hmmm. Given his engineered escape, and the way the Imperials treated him after, I rather think Palpy did know the venom was wearing off. It seems like him, anyway, to torture someone by making them do something they don't like to themselves, and tricking them into doing it willingly. Although, Sidious didn't predict Obi-Wan fighting back and injuring Vader, did he? So he couldn't have known he would be giving Obi instructions on his own, and that makes the escape right after rather confusing. Ah, well. Good story, if a bit rough in places. And there were a few sentences or paragraphs that were a bit obvious, like I found myself thinking, "yes, we know that darling, go on" but it was okay. And Obi-Wan had to think his way through things somehow, didn't he? In conclusion, I enjoyed reading it.

Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck.

Yes, the names are believable (I like btau!). And this is awesome so far.

A sweet ending. I lost it when Leia spoke like Yoda - that was clever!
All in all, a fun read. I wonder what Anakin thought of all this.
Anways, thanks for writing and sharing!

I'm actually really sad about what happened to Ammo and Greg.
Even if they were just OCs, it was refreshing to see the clones portrayed in a positive light.
Also I totally think Sidious knew the venom was letting up. He's too perceptive not to have.

DAMN SIDIOUS.

What a mean man.

I think the clone names are perfectly believeable and im glad you included them. I also like Sidious' creepy laugh lol

I like the addition of Olin as well as the small kindness the clones showed Obi-Wan. I hate when they're made out to be mindless drones.

Nice chapter! I like the more we learn about Anakin's control.

Ahhh, I love your characterization of Palpatine! Ooh what's gonna happen?

So is Obi-Wan unable to use the Force because he is wearing Force suppressors, or because Anakin fed from him? I also like what you say about Anakin and control; that is totally true.