Reviews for Artificial Mirror
romagen chapter 9 . 12/3/2018
Have fun in college
Cadelorbe12 chapter 9 . 9/19/2017
I would love if this continued.
BraveWolf13 chapter 9 . 8/27/2017
This is awesome and I want to see where this will go so please continue
Lord Anonymous chapter 9 . 8/9/2017
Hello!
I've just read though all your story's chapters and I wanted to say, Amazing job! Your characters feel real and your idea for this story is original and very good 11/10!

I also see that you haven't updated this story in a long while and I can wonder why but I'll probably be wrong,

So for now I'll keep this story in mind and check in every once in a while and one day (hopefully soon:)) you will update it and I can enjoy reading it again

Until next time!
Blessings of Babylon chapter 1 . 3/18/2017
A shame to see this unupdated. A OC that I dont hate - that's surprising, a genuinely interesting plot divergence, more or less in character characters, and a above average writing ability. I was hoping to see an end to this story.
thecatleader chapter 9 . 2/7/2017
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE
Why did Sif have to die chapter 2 . 5/18/2016
I like the non solo player Kirito. The OC also seems very intressting and I must say I've never even heard about such sword in any game XD. Keep up the good work
The Patoon chapter 9 . 5/3/2016
Well I just found this recently and I must say it was awesome...enough for me to binge read the first 6 chapters in about 1 hour...I hope you're able to update soon as I really like this story...especially your OC character Mane...definitely gives SAO a different aspect to it...I'm not sure what constructive criticism I can give...I'm a newbie at writing as well :P
Guest chapter 9 . 1/21/2016
Frickin'... GAAH! I MISREAD THE UPDATE DATE AND GOT MYSELF ALL EXCITED FOR THE NEW CHAPTER! That wonderful new chapter that doesn't exist yet!
XSer chapter 3 . 1/5/2016
mane x kirito
Bright Man Akihiko chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
Well, I guess there's no Sachi and Tsukiyo no Kuro Neko... On the life monolith thingy, there would've been Sachi between Saba and Sade.
Bright Man Akihiko chapter 6 . 12/6/2015
Soichi is similar to Sachi... Coinidence? I think not, man.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/28/2015
TAIC has been deployed again... I can honestly say that I didn't see that one coming. Although it seems to be much more serious for Sirius (yes I just said that).
P.S.: UPDATE ALREADY, GOSH DARN IT!
dhyetaX1999 chapter 9 . 10/28/2015
...Vassago? don't tell me it's the absolutely charismatic, hidden villain arch enemy of SAO leader of Laughing Coffin, PoH?!
I what the deal is with Mane! *whine*
PrincessArien chapter 9 . 8/31/2015
Vassago...? Oh my gosh, is that PoH?! This is obviously an important event regardless of if it's introducing us to PoH or not, as this marks the first recorded instance of actual PKing in this story. This story is fairly interesting, lots of questions and mysteries you've thrown our way. I'll definitely be following this one to see where it winds up going :D
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