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Worthwhile. Not a monster projekt to read. Not up there with the best, but it almost could be. it's worth your time.

Build up good sir down below. Because build up, character and kinks combined into one unholy mess of tension, chemistry and teasing
And holy fuck did you establish these characters well.
Only three of em and some others designed for a purpose, whatever.
But the relationships between them. Oh boi.

Also: This story is a good example of why, although you could, if you felt that way, that you should, in fact, not necessarily chain sentences like a mothertrucker.
Ruins the flow of reading if done wrongly and without proper punctuation. You can be fancy all you want, but as a wise little girl once saidWhat did it cost?"

Anyway. Only thing I don't like about this as well so read it.

Also 2.0: Kinda cringe that the last review was 2018. Not deserved. Here you go. Good fucking job.

Holy fuck... I have no fucking idea if I've reviewed yet or not but... Fuck... Why is it that virgin's make the best lemons/smut?

Lowkey was such an abrupt ending but... I understand if you've lost your interest in the pairing and story, I still appreciate what you've uploaded. I know I haven't reviewed much, but I want you to know that it's because I've just been so into the story and plot that typing or texting in my case just seems like an utter waste of time... But still amazing story you've written, thank you for making it.

,*SCREAMS IN ABSOLUTE EXCITEMENT* I AM FUCKING LIVING THIS SHIT!

Awesome story once again! Of course just like always you nailed Kidd's character!

Also the fanart links are not working, they have disappeared completely from the chapters, just so you know :)

Kate my girl LOOOOOOOOOL she's got backbone I know it xDDD

Your OC is hilarious xDD I could picture every little things she does including her facial expression when doing all of that. Those hyper girls and their too much energy, lol. Kidd's going to have it rough I see :'DD

Update immediately, please!

I really like this : )
I think you portrayed Kidd's and killer's personalities pretty well here!
Good job!

I really like this story!

Ok imo, I would've liked the ending to be longer. It would've been cool to read about Kidd's "awakening" from the poisoning...that conversation between him and Killer would've been awesome to read.

I really like how you kept them in-character through out the story, esp. when Kate first told Kidd that she loved him and he was all "no you don't".

Nice final chapter I really liked it.

love

:I I demand more. I read all of this story and i demand more! XD just kidding about the demanding part...but i do want more. :3

love this story