Reviews for When We Fall Down
annabeth chase chapter 4 . 10/14/2017
This is so cute I love it so much although there probably could have been some more of tooth in this one but other than that it was perfectD
PeterPanfan13 chapter 7 . 3/5/2016
Awesome story! I eating up every word of it! Keep it up!
Nightqueen333 chapter 7 . 7/26/2015
Really enjoyed this, good job!
Can'tResistThisFantabulosity chapter 7 . 2/17/2015
Sweet ending! :) Fantabulous story. :) Very nice writing as well.
Can'tResistThisFantabulosity chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
Nice job! :)
E. Aster Cottontail chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Awesome so far.
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 7 . 2/17/2014
Great story
EmotionalDreamer101 chapter 7 . 2/8/2014
Omg, this is so cute :D I'm gonna die, I love this XD North is hilarious, I love Jack hitting him in the head with his staff XD And that was so cute with Baby Tooth :D This is really good, This is adorable :) I love all the hurt/comfort with Bunny, you killed my heart with that :'D I loves this.
PhoenixWytch chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
This chapter made me laugh so hard! Mostly because it reminded me of something that happened to me. :D

Thank you so much for writing & sharing. I'm really looking forward to reading more.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
No wife or Mrs clause or who ever ,to me it ruins saint nicks macho coolness .so sorry for being a critique but your a clam short of a don't make jack sound all...frail.
Pebblepaw chapter 6 . 6/1/2013
They tricked him,
Katyuana chapter 7 . 4/18/2013
North totally deserved that! Jack should've hit him more!
Ijusttaserdyou chapter 7 . 3/25/2013
It's spring snow, you know!
beanie-art1 chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
Really like this story, you have done a fantastic job :3 can't wait for the next chapter, and please do leave a link to your DA pictures, would be great to see them :D
majestic.beauty.sealed.in.ice chapter 7 . 2/22/2013
OMG! These story is awsome please update more! Don't leave ur fans hanging when they love what u do! :D Good job!
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