This is pretty dark. But i would be happy to find out ron's dad is bonnie's father and ron saves her from the fall. Which is why kim is so heartbroken that she cannot save would be that rons dad didnt know his wife was pregnant because it was only a week into it. When he found out he was going to be a father he didnt want to mess it up when he found out about bonnie also..he figured bonnies mom and her husband's would do fine, they already had 2 children. He cheated because he wanted children and he didnt think his wife could have any though he loved her. He eventually told her the truth and they constantly vaction to make it up to her...

Oh this is good this is very good please update soon.

this gets really nasty - and I find it highly inappropriate of Tara to read that letter aloud. I wonder if Junior got it to become the support Bonnie's so desperately in need of - judging by the prologue he won't -

Junior has a friend who'll put her up? I know he's oblivious to other people, but really - he's not coming to meet her? I fear that Bonnie's troubles are just starting, she seems tough enough to recover so far. I mean it's not like she found out on Jerry Springer or some similar show...

Glad to see you return to this. Reasons and causes partially revealed. Looking forward to more.

Already sent you a PM on this, but Tara is (in my opinion) the understanding one. Sure she has seen all of Bon Bon's little tricks and I guess she could be a little calloused after four years in high school and who knows how many before that. Stillll...she was in my opinion a little OC.

I like the Bonnie knocking the living crap out of her (half) sisters, I know that if I ever had someone taunt me the way they taunt Bonnie there would have been blood flowing years before!

The whole event was much better than the 'Reality TV' shows the older 'sisters' loved to watch. But ain't it something when you're on the receiving end of thrown punches for a change...?

Pretty bad scene at the Rockwaller home, now to see the next steps in Bonnie's exodus.

CB73

Boo-Yah, Bonnie! That's showing your 'sisters' who's boss! :)

wow this seems interesting keep it coming

I just hope the prologue isn't the final closure of the story. This chapter closes really ominously ... I'm looking forward to the next chapter

I'm with Larry on this, all I can figure out is that Bonnie...lives? LOL!

But getting back on track, looks like Bonnie's life after the end of year at school is about to go way off the Disney Reservation.

And I can't wait to see how far you take her.

CB73

Do the Fannies have a category for "Best Tease in an Opening Chapter"?

Just wondering...

Jimmy

I like gark and dritty fanfics and you've caught my interest with this. I normaly don't like Bonnie R. Knew several cheerleaders that Bonnie must have been modeled after and I was bottom of the food chain.

Anyhoo, Please continue when you can.

Hey Stormy thanks for the shout, but I don't know how it's gonna end...uh CB is playing this close to his chest.

Anyway nice work, we get to see our lil Bon Bon in a different light...uh that is if she survives, dang I forgot I wonder if Kim survives? If that happens I think it will tear up Tara more once the platinum blonde realizes that some softer words might have caused this episode to change a little.

So Bonnie I think you have more people pulling for you than you realize. Come to think of it I wonder WHO had Kim and Wade try to find her? Bonnie's parents? Tara? Junior? Good thing I'm in this for the long haul.

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