I'm so sorry that you got trolled but because of that I found your story when you posted it in archive of are own and started to read even though there is only 7 chapters I can't get enough of it and started to look for other website might have posted the full story because I needed to know what was going to happen next what I'm trying to say is that even though you went through so much trouble with the trolling I think that more people are going to find and love want you write like I did and that can't be a bad thing in my opinion

Hi! I found you on watt pad but it shows that you haven’t posted any stories yet. I’ve followed Waylaid for years and am so thrilled you’re finishing it! Can you link me where to find it?

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'd normally start by saying I was fandom blinf. While officially that's true you've just made me look at my childhood stories in a new light.
Emma's jealousy of Tinkerbell was really well captured. As for Regina in therapy using wine to loosen her tongue, brilliant. But it was Cinderella and Mr Gold who's interaction I enjoyed the most. Belle seems to be the one holding them all together. I liked the jumping from conversation to conversation around the world they all seem to have found themselves in. Good job.

Hi there. I've been trying to "fight" the spam by giving people "real reviews." And I owe you a thank you, considering the wonderful review you gave me for my OUAT crossover.

It's interesting that you wrote the first section from Smee's perspective. I don't think I've ever read a story that has his POV in it. Granted, I haven't looked, but still he isn't really a character the show focused much attention on, either. I think you've written him well, from what the show told us. He'll work for anyone if the deal is right. Whether it's Moe, Hook, or Rumple.

I like Rumple trying to exploit Red's new friendship with Belle for his own gain. That's exactly the kind of thing he would do, especially with Belle being so important to him. But there is a limit to what Red is willing to do. "I won't report on Belle for you."

I LOVE Belle's reflection on the reference to her fairytale. No unresolved issues. The end.
As much as I always loved the classic fairytales, "the happily ever after" at the end has always bothered me. But in OUAT, they don't do that, because the characters are three - dimensional, and problems don't just end like that. Not without new ones starting, that is.
And I really liked the progression of all the OUAT characters eventually realized. The needed to stop trying to find "happily ever after" and just live their lives. (Hence the "Happy beginning" at the end of the series.)
Another thing that was really nice was Belle's reflection on the difference between her additude in EF vs. Storybrooke about her relationship with Rumple. "Back in the Enchanted Forest she'd known he was the grand, boundless, unpredictable adventure where she wanted to spend her life. Here in Storybrooke... after three decades as Regina's pawn, anything other than complete control over her circumstances panicked her." I've never thought about Belle's character like that before.

Charming has a bit of tunnel vison when it comes to getting his family home. He's willing to let Regina look at the "other realm books" because he knows she's trying to reform, and he knows that's what Henry wants. But he's forgetting how many people Regina terriorized besides just his family. Belle is NOT going to be comfortable with Regina anywhere near her.

Hello there. I’m from the Basic review game. I’m both new to the game and fandom-blind, so hopefully my review isn’t too terrible.

The opening was pretty cool and it felt like I was watching a scene from certain kinds of movies (I can’t remember any specific examples right now though).

Maybe this is just my fandom-blindness speaking, since by its extension I don’t know the characters or what they look like, but I at times had a challenging time trying to create pictures in my mind as I was reading this. I mean, I think I understand the gist of everything going on so far, but I’m having some difficulty playing out the scenes in my head. However, starting from about two-thirds of the way down, I wasn’t having that problem quite as much.

One thing I really want to commend you on is the formatting and SPaG. I cannot find any issues with any of that, so good job!

Out of the characters introduced in this story so far, Bella is my favorite. If I find myself reviewing additional chapters to this, I will be looking forward to what comes for her.

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

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And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

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Hearing a noise behind him, Mr. Gold twisted around to see Ruby holding up an old world lock and key.

He paid an eternal life for each one of us. O.o

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

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Mr. Gold heard a gasp and looked at Dr. Hopper. His horror mirrored the marionettes'. Did he just now recognize them?

I heard you need help. :P

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

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The gangly nun came to an awkward stop, her navy blue cape swinging. Her big doe eyes looked embarrassed and determined at the same time. "I think you need to leave. Mother Superior has a cell phone, and she's calling Sheriff Nolan right now."

How long have you lived there?. ;P;

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

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"My dad's in that book. I'm working up to it."

The Caped Crusader is friends with Robin, the boy Wonder. :P

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

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Mr. Smee squealed like a pig, fell on his butt, and clasped his bruised wrist. No longer blocked, the door shut and the lock clicked.

So bad it hurts. T_T

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

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"Mr. Gold."

I was not made for the life of a shepherd. O_O

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They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

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Leroy (Grumpy): Just 'cause you possess something don't mean it's yours (The Crocodile).

The room was full of girls in white. :D

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

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For those who don't know TV's Once Upon a Time... click on my profile for a quick background on the story world and story characters.

This website is all about the LGBT. :-)

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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On the fifth graders' first visit the previous Monday, the sheriff's grandson Henry had shown her the fairy tale that pictured her and Rumple: "Beauty and the Beast." The version in my book was more accurate, he'd said, but my mom tore the pages out. I think she was hiding them from Mr. Gold. When Henry had let on his adoptive mother was Regina—something Belle hadn't heard before—she'd continued to smile. Such a sweet boy didn't need another tale of how the woman who'd raised him had wreaked havoc on someone's life. Besides, Belle never told anyone Regina had locked her up for the twenty-nine years of the Storybrooke curse on a psych ward for the criminally insane. Under false pretenses, of course, but she didn't like discussing it. So she had thanked Henry and promised to read the story later.

Thank God that day's over. O.o

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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"She has yet to try a burger, though. She won't say why."

We should worship our ancestors. :)