| Reviews for Betrayal |
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  Pokemon chapter 2 . 5/11/2018 Is there going to be another chapter |
 917brat chapter 2 . 12/31/2017 please add more to this soon, and what happened to the evee that May stole fro ASh? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/3/2017 Plz continue |
| Damien chapter 2 . 12/23/2015 Great story please update also can you make Butterfree and Primeape return to Ash also can you give him the Gastly from Ghost at Maidein Peak |
| fyphoniex chapter 2 . 2/1/2015 aw so sad please update soon this is so sweet poor ash I hope he gets to see Pikachu again |
| Patriot-112 chapter 2 . 5/6/2014 I hope he gets his Pokemon back. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/28/2014 So now you're not finishing this?Oh wow 're bashing a character,aren't you? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/14/2013 Update?! Are you alright? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2013 Love it make chapter 3 |
| God people chapter 2 . 3/12/2013 Wow so ominous. I read the story earlier today and lol I saw 1 chapter and now I see 2 chapters lol. |
| Mieoak chapter 2 . 3/2/2013 Omg nice story, it's so sad! Please update soon! |
| Fennekin chapter 2 . 2/12/2013 May will pay! |
| Zatch Bell-01 chapter 2 . 1/4/2013 Nice one. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2012 please hurry i cant stand it |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2012 i loved the story please update |
