Reviews for Unbelievable
Jcassie chapter 4 . 8/17
ah a shame that you had to introduce a child.
Wolvie26 chapter 24 . 2/20
Love it!
adores.dylan chapter 9 . 9/7/2019
So is she 6 or is she 10? I’m so confused!
monay9e chapter 24 . 8/21/2019
Loved it!
KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 6/27/2019
Love this sweet work
li-spar1 chapter 11 . 7/26/2018
Really good story till I got to the part of Jacob imprinting on Kassie. The rest has been really good so far.
acetwolf94 chapter 24 . 6/24/2018
I LOVE IT! I wasn't ready for it to end. It was great!
jaspersmate81 chapter 24 . 4/14/2018
Amazing story. I absolutely loved it. This is the 2nd time I've read it. I was just wondering whatever happened with Maria? I thought Malice the Pixie Bitch was taking orders from her Mistress? Did she just never show up because she knew she couldn't win against the Major and Enyo? Not to mention Ares and his Goddess of War? Keep up the excellent work. I wish that you would write a sequel and have Maria and the Volturi go against them in seperate attacks or something like that. It would be cool.
jeoliverio chapter 24 . 4/9/2018
This was a great story. I love J&B stories
Kushka chapter 24 . 8/10/2017
Great story
TinaF chapter 24 . 7/6/2017
Great story! Thank you for sharing.
Worthless Freak chapter 1 . 5/20/2017
I have read this story multiple times,It's one of my favorites. Your writing style is so unique, the way you use your words I can imagine everything story makes me smile and these days I don't do a lot of that and so when I read your story and smile it simply makes my day and for that I'm internally grateful...Please keep writing XOXO
Sincerely,
Your Average Worthless Freak
CountryBaby93 chapter 9 . 2/8/2017
I really tried to read this story. And I think it is a good story. But it is moving way to fast and focused only on the conflict. Like examples such as. Bella immediately took to jasper and jumped into his arms. And kassie immediately took to the family after all that happened to her. The. I absolutely don't like those parts about kassie. It's disgusting. The story as a whole is just
... poorly constructed. I'm sorry. This is not a flame.
Cacau Black chapter 2 . 11/17/2016
Wonderful :)
Cacau Black chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Awesome!
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