Reviews for Unbelievable |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ah a shame that you had to introduce a child. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So is she 6 or is she 10? I’m so confused! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this sweet work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story till I got to the part of Jacob imprinting on Kassie. The rest has been really good so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! I wasn't ready for it to end. It was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. I absolutely loved it. This is the 2nd time I've read it. I was just wondering whatever happened with Maria? I thought Malice the Pixie Bitch was taking orders from her Mistress? Did she just never show up because she knew she couldn't win against the Major and Enyo? Not to mention Ares and his Goddess of War? Keep up the excellent work. I wish that you would write a sequel and have Maria and the Volturi go against them in seperate attacks or something like that. It would be cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story. I love J&B stories |
![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() I have read this story multiple times,It's one of my favorites. Your writing style is so unique, the way you use your words I can imagine everything story makes me smile and these days I don't do a lot of that and so when I read your story and smile it simply makes my day and for that I'm internally grateful...Please keep writing XOXO Sincerely, Your Average Worthless Freak |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really tried to read this story. And I think it is a good story. But it is moving way to fast and focused only on the conflict. Like examples such as. Bella immediately took to jasper and jumped into his arms. And kassie immediately took to the family after all that happened to her. The. I absolutely don't like those parts about kassie. It's disgusting. The story as a whole is just ... poorly constructed. I'm sorry. This is not a flame. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |