This is so good! But I cant bring myself to read anymore. This is so sad...

this entire story was amazing. ahhhh! i didn't know that i could experiance so many emotions at once!

That was amazingly awesome and I have to say my favorite is Antonio through how could he wield an axe with one arm? Oh well it's Toni I shouldn't be surprised

OMFG You didn't actually amputate Gilbert, did you!? _
(And yes, I'm reading this 2015 lol)

Emérghad what 'ave you done to ze BTT!?
Mi Boyz! D:

(Totally loving this story BTW)

U stole my "DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW" 's

Dude, this story was one of the best I've ever read! It made me laugh, smile, cry in the corner. I kinda related to it because one of my close family members died in a car accident. I love the way you write. Absolutely brilliant! :3

OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT! I knew you were going to end it by having Ludwig and Vash show up at the end but it still didn't stop the tears of happiness from coming to my eyes! Amazing job!

This is such a beautiful story! I loved it so much - god, I can't even find the words to explain just how much I loved it! I'm glad that you have France with Jean, and Prussia with Hungary at the end of this chapter.

This deserves so many more reviews that it's got. I want to say wow but that doesn't quite hit the nail on the head does it?

Anyways... I'm rambling. I'm going to go check out other pieces that you've written now, assuming you've got other pieces. Either way, you're an amazing author and you should never stop writing!

Ciao, Mint

I have read the entire story and I thouroughly enjoyed it! Firstly, congratulations on completing such a long and intricate story, it's not an easy task :) Secondly, well done on portraying the drama of the situation while also keeping it funny in places and making it a joy to read. The facts were obviously well researched and the complexity made it interesting and kept me guessing the whole time. The characterisation in places could maybe be improved but you're clearly very talented and I'm sure you'll continue to grow as a writer :) Keep it up!

I meant to say 05 June 2013. Sorry, Finals Week is just getting to me! Ok, bye now...

Perfect end! I'm so glad that I stuck around, this is perhaps one of the more underappreciated gems on this entire website. You had everything down to a pinpoint (well, except a few parts towards the end with timing and such); not only that, but it was well elaborated, well plotted, and greatly executed. I was not expecting the end at all, and that is one thing I loved in this story, the sudden turns. You know, while I rarely log in, I think that this is one of the handful of stories that I managed to read through to the end, AND actually review more than one.

I still can't believe that the Vargas Twins, Antonio, and Belle were mafia!? Wait, does this mean Francis was also mafia? Since the mob is very family-centric and Francis is a cousin to Lovino, it would imply it as so, wouldn't it? Especially due to the fact, that Francis was wielding a gun, his proficency with it is not known, but by simply having it and stolling in there as if nothing, one can assume that he's had some experience with it, no?

Overall, this story pleased me, and entertained me to the point of procrasting during finals week. I just had to reread you story in its entirety again. You my good author, has given me something that not a lot of the good authors (at least in my opinion) has given me: closure. It appears that when I fall in love with a story, the authors leave it unfinished, but you have completed it, and for that, I commend you!

May you continue to write and may you skills with the pen grow sharper day by day.

With the Upmost Respect,
J'suis le Canada
(05 May 2013)

Great story. :)

Good chapter

So much action! Too put it simply, I love how you're putting the climax as a true climax. I'll leave it short this time, since it is frankly a shock to me. It is great. I will wait until the final chapter, mostly because I love these kind of stories.

You finally updated! I'm so glad. The new chapter is very exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next. You make the characters seem deep and alive to where you just want to keep reading. I'll be awaiting the next parts the story. :]