I really wish this story could update.

Hah! I love this story! It's brilliant and well written, great job!
It's a shame you stopped writing but I get you have your own life and stuff.
Regardless, you did an incredible job on this.

Man this story its on hiatus

Marie should join the crew

ok, grim minato...COOL

Whoa, I seriously didn't see Minato dieing since he is your go to character, but even though I adore Minato's personality of being lazy and carefree yet carring a heavy burden as shown by his celestial suicidal tendencies and mischievous mechanisms, it is intriguing to see your interpretation of Yu and his calm, collected self who is also determined to fight for the truth. And considering that riveting awakening scene, all I have got to say on that topic is a long-nosed, crescent grin ," very interesting." Another thing, will Yu be able to tap into either his plethora of Personas or the power of the wild card, or will his power come from his determination and the drive to seek the truth. One issue in this is Youske as if I didn't know that he was Yu's age, I would say that he is a little kid who is way too hyperactive after his entire island is slaughtered. He's most likely hiding his sorrow on the inside, but there just seems to be more eloquent ways to express this. Then again, Youske's way of being eloquent is for him to proclaim his uncontrollable bowels.

Please update this story?

I'm guessing Minato ate the death death fruit or something like that. Please update soon!

Will any one piece characters join you'd crew?

oK, THIS COULD WORK!

As one of the few people that believe Yu is Izanagi's reincarnation, it would only be natural if I paired him up with his wife right?

Now that I've said that...

Ryoji and Minato as the evil dudes... Holycrapthat'soawesomeIthinkmyheadwoulbur st!

Seriously... But it's a little hard to imagine Ryoji as a bad guy. It would be like Teddie is the killer in Persona 4.

Update please.

Cool chapter and big surprise with Minato can't wait for his reunion with Yu.

Damn. I was hoping that I was right. Oh well, I'll wait and see. Also, I checked that site on your profile. My Authentic Japanese Name is Junichiro (First Pure Son).

Anyways, yay for Ryoji! I'm gonna give a guess about his devil fruit. Death Fruit. Basically gives him Zeref-like powers.

VERY NICE! Thou Chie is gunna freak the fuck out when Yu and Yosuke kill marines! Also YES RYOJI IS HERE! Also I suggest The Reaper for Minato's Crew! YU VS LUFFY! FIGHT!

Minato's working with Takaya? Awesome! Does this mean Strega is a part of the crew and how about Pharos? That would be interesting.