Reviews for Second Destiny
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6/2016
This plot is messy as hell. I don't know why I am waiting my time with this.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/6/2016
Never have I ever seen a story so fucking rushed in all my years as a fanfiction reader... this is awful.
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 5 . 12/4/2015
Nice!
Yhannie814 chapter 2 . 8/17/2015
Is Naru just a frickin specter or something cause I can't see any shinobi action anywhere near the chappie and P.S. Naru is a bit too ooc
Yhannie814 chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
GRAMMAR
Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2015
I will want to strangle you if you pair Naru with Hibari
CloudySkies2208 chapter 5 . 6/20/2015
Heyy where's the next chapter..?
And can you make Naru together with Hibari.?
James chapter 5 . 6/2/2015
I really like this story but it was last updated in 2014 I hope you didn't abandon it
Guest chapter 2 . 4/18/2015
make naru x hibari
Fireicedragonslayer chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
HibariXNaru. Pls.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/31/2015
oooooo naru vs reborn, who would win?
FireKitsGal chapter 5 . 12/24/2014
interesting idea
AsianGirl88 chapter 5 . 12/19/2014
can Naru go with Hibari?
update...
i'll be waiting.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/25/2014
ooooo I hope naru and hibari get together! his nickname for her is precious! plus hibird already approves :)
Lady Michiko chapter 5 . 11/27/2014
I like the story update soon. Og is this a yamamotoXnarufic it'll be good _
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