Fran was a selfish b***h. She was becoming just like her mother. She was going to leave her family in their time of need because she "couldn't take it anymore". Well tough luck sweetheart. Life isn't all sunshine and rainbows, you can't leave your family to fend for themselves just because it is better for you. *end rant* Sorry. Had to get that off my chest. I thought Fran was a terrible and selfish character.

I cried

Awesome...

I have read the whole thing and I'm confused. In the movie Jack was meeting the Tooth Fairy for the first time. And North wouldn't just invite him in the pole, would he? And it sounded like Jack had taken the oath already and wouldn't Bunny still be pissed at him? It's confusing.

That's sad, HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO HIM!

Aaawww. Sooo sweeet. And sad.

really? interesting way to end it, my friend.

very interesting indeed...

this is so coolio!

i totally gotta read more!

Awww poor Jack

That was a great story. I liked it! Great job!

That last paragraph...oh my heart. TT TT

I love the way you linked your story with the events of the movie.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

I say he should be able to say Goodbye, he should not mess with Easter but should freeze the elves. And what does your lifeguard class and getting a job have to do with the story?!

Omg, is it going to be the last chapter already? I'd like to point out that I really like how you put detail into the idea that Jack would be hurt that we has left out again, it's just a small part but I believe it puts depth and realism into the story, and wow 7 years!? that's so long T_T great fic though! I hope he reaches them in time!

T_T Oh tears...this is so emotional and wow I am taken aback, I'm impressed with how things have gone so far! I wish this has a happy ending but well...you're the writer so I'll respect whatever you have in store for us! Thank you for this chapter, it is splendid!