FAVORITE. this is absolutely lovely.

Ahhh... I love these Shinji/Asuka fics you write. Really good stuff. :)

Thanks for writing!

Kawaii desu ne!

(The above is what Novaki says when the story is too cute for words.)

/ /Novaki/ /

That there was an "Aw!" moment if I ever heard one.

And from eight years ago no less.

Till next time... adios.

Most excellent WAFF! Beautifully written and realised. Love good S/A WAFF and this is amongst the best I've read. I know that you wrote this long ago, but I'd love to see more. You should write some more Eva stuff!

Great stuff!

Ja.

Greenfang.

this is a very great one shot i think it has some potental please write another chapter if you feel up to it

A very good story that does justice to the alternate world. Excellent job

i loved it.

dat shit iz tite

Oh my god! I love this! I love you! It's so great that you're romantic! All hail S/A! YEAH!

P.S. How about a sequel?

Cool fic I liked it a lot, I haven't seen episode 26 yet but I've read some stuff on it and I love Evangelion.

Again great fic really enjoyed it,

Cya,

Phoenix

i think i've read this fanfic for the sixth time. everytime i feel like reading something worth while, i'll come to this story. this is my favorite fanfiction of all-time, and i want to thank you for writing such a masterpiece

oh man... another great romance fic written by you. You're really quite good at this.

The flashback to sandbox was very sweet. Haha I'm a sucker for Shinji-Asuka childhood fics, so having a taste of that in this fic was very pleasing. Great job.

The schoolbag was a great touch too. Even Asuka sounds oblivious to her own sentimentality over her school bag. )

Your premise for this story, that of Shinji giving Asuka a piggyback ride is, is very refreshing. Great idea, great story. Again, pity you're no longer writing EVA fics.

YATTA! GREAT! Definatelly worth the time. This really great. I am a Shinji/Asuka Fan (Romance) and I definatelly like this one. I love how you made the whole story go out. (by that i mean: The life Shinji had. The way Asuka acted. The way you made Asuka point of View, etc). I can't wait to read more fics that you have create (If you have writing some). I going to tell my other friends to read this story. They are Eva fans too.(Shinji/Asuka fan).

You Definatelly need to make more chapter of this story. You can expand this story and I assure you it will be great. High Hopes Here.

Danny

Best oneshot shinji/asuka fic out there! therefore, best oneshot eva fic out there! :D