this was very Good Great Job

tbh one of the best robb/oc fanfics i’ve ever read. her character development was amazing, and you somehow managed to balance her winning the iron throne with NOT making her a mary sue. great job! 3

IM SO HYPEEEE HOLY SHIT

best got book with the best ending!

LOVE IT OMG

Another great chapter!
Robb absolutely dominating Joffrey and then Mella rubbing salt in the wound was excellent. Shame Uncle Jaime interrupted what was sure to be a flirtatious spar filled with Sexual Tension.
And then Jaime obviously setting Mella up to want to die in a hole. Yay. That was just uncomfortable for everyone involved.
Theon and Mella is cute. I like that he’s making an effort to be friendly, even though I suspect it’s partly to annoy Robb because that’s the sort of bullshit best mates do haha

Okay this chapter had a lot of things I loved.
Mella serving the tea to Joffrey not once but TWICE! Yaaaassss.
Also the dance between Mella and Robb was fucking adorable and I loved it so much. Look at these two dorks, fucking get it!
And then Cersei ruins it by being a Lannister. Again, 10/10 parenting my friend. No wonder nobody likes you and you spawned a lunatic I swear.

Wow Cersei right out the gate trying to scare her daughter off the Starks. 10/10 parenting there my friend.
Oh come now, don’t act like she’s your favourite now Cersei! Mella will eventually have to marry after all, we can’t all fuck our brothers like you do hahaha
I feel for Mella a lot. It would feel like a horrible betrayal to be left in the frozen north. But as I’m sure she’ll discover the Starks are a hell of a lot more pleasant than the Lannister’s haha

An excellent start to this fic. I’ve instantly got a feel for Mella and enjoy her POV for this adventure. It’s realistic the way she interacts with her siblings (when she shot Joffrey down I did a little cheer) and her estranged relationship with Cersei being the only one of Roberts children.

Amazing job! Such a great plot!

That last paragraph was so powerful - great work!

INCREDIBLE! LOVE the idea of Obseydian!

I was SO terrified that the vial Nolan gave her would kill the child, SO happy that Willem survived!

So I am definitely a hardcore gendrya (occasional well-written Jaime and Arya) fan, so I'm not gonna lie, the Gendry and Sansa pairing has me a bit queasy. But the rest of the story is still awesome!

SO HAPPY that Robb won!