It's good~ the only thing is that both Jokers are prison wardens. It's part of their role. It's just that White prefers the circus and Black prefers the prison. They switch sometimes in the games.

Aww, I really like how you described White. He actually helped a lot of people even though nobody noticed it and think differently of him. He should be more appreciated. This greatly changed my perspective of him.

Wow! This was super cute and you did a great job! :) I love how you made White Joker the finder of lost things as well. Great job! :D

This is just so wonderfully written! I love seeing White's point of view on things. Also him having such an important yet ignored job - never thought about that!

OMGDAFKNKDNBVKNKNJDAKAC- I'm sorry; I just had a spazzing moment because of how beautiful this is. Holy crap, Joker. I love that man, now. This story is... indescribable... It's amazing. Honestly.

...Awww, you made White sound so nice! Which is refreshing since in the better percentage of Joker-involved fanfics, he's an evil sadist...but an excellent job!

cute! nice one-shot!

Interesting concept. The imagery and emotions were right on target and I like your idea of an OC. Great job!

I like your writing style
You don't see many fics about Joker's input on anything really
Overall good job

tis cute