Reviews for Hit the Road
Yin - Yang M chapter 23 . 3/8
I hope you do a part 3 to this story it's good
wbfanatic4eva chapter 3 . 11/2/2017
Just started reading this cant wait to see where this goes... but as someone who LOVES blackjack I can say this chapter was pretty accurate, outside of a few things... But you can definitely win that much in a short time, depending on how much you're betting. I once won 17 thousand in just over an hour! Just had to comment that, now on to more reading...
I'm A Sucker For Love Stories chapter 3 . 3/6/2017
Gambling is definitely Veronica's thing though! There was a high school case, and then she was allowed to play and beat them all, don't you remember?
anonymouse chapter 23 . 2/4/2017
NO! THIS IS WAY TOO GOOD TO END!

you should totally make it into a trilogy!
Guest chapter 23 . 3/26/2016
Sad it's over! Thanks. This was very enjoyable.
NorCal91 chapter 23 . 8/4/2014
All done, yay! And I'm ready for the sequel...
NorCal91 chapter 21 . 8/4/2014
I love Party Down! It's definitely my kind of show.
NorCal91 chapter 2 . 8/3/2014
Really enjoying reading your MaDi stories even a few years later (I just found fan fiction)! PS the PCH ends in LA and eventually becomes highway 101 (Pismo is on 101, I went to college near there). This summer I've really been hung up on where exactly Neptune would be located because none of the mileage makes sense. I saw something on tumblr trying to explain it, haha. Oh the things I obsess about on summer vacation! Haha
Phoenix chapter 23 . 6/23/2014
Looooved it! Such an amazing fic!
justamarshmallow chapter 23 . 5/1/2014
Loved this! I for one would love to see a trilogy. Not that you didn't end it in a great place, but I'm selfish and want more MaDi! Also, the whole Party Down thing made me smile a lot cause I just rewatched the show! Anyways, can't wait to see more from you!
DalWriter chapter 23 . 4/14/2014
All happy love stories end with a wedding, even if the main characters aren't the ones getting married. It did take me a while to get through this. I am not a fan of merry go round on again, off again relationships, not even LoVe, so this story didn't speak to me as much as some of your other works. I did like the Scrappy Do comments. You wrote the push pull well even if I don't care for the genre. I liked that Mac's parents came to know the truth. Overall I applaud your efforts.
TurquoiseDragonfly chapter 23 . 3/11/2014
Well, my favourite bit of this is quite obviously Dick teasing Mac about his conversation with Weevil! ... glad you manage to spin it out into an entire chapter!

... really enjoyed Dick stepping in with Mac and her parents, although I'm not sure I'm totally happy with Mac letting Dick take any of the blame for that night!

Veronica & Dick seem to be getting on a lot better these days, and even dancing without snarking at one another! ... bless, poor embarrassed Mac having to dance with the groom!

A really sweet happy ending for the story ... was lovely to see the whole gang around a table enjoying the wedding together! ... will be interested to see a new story in this series if it shows up! ... for the time being I'm very happily awaiting the next instalment of Parker's Hen Do (A Weekend Away!) x
lateVMlover chapter 23 . 3/10/2014
"Making her a Neptunian version of Atlas"-great mythology allusion! :)
I enjoyed the dialogue. Not sure Weevil would be invited to the wedding, though. He's not a friend of Keith's really. I'm a little disappointed that you still didn't have Dick and Mac express their love for each other. I like things spelled out. It's like you're writing for Bones. They cheated us out of the hook up and first love declaration, too! :) (I'm watching Bones while I read this). I really liked Keith acknowledging my thoughts. I liked Dick pulling a card from Logan's play book here at the end. It shows a lot of growth. Good tale! I think there's definitely room for more in this story! :)
rocklesson86 chapter 23 . 3/10/2014
I am glad Dick hired Weevil to guard Mac. Cannot wait for more.
kstrac75 chapter 23 . 3/10/2014
I'm so sad to see this story end...really hope that you do decide to write a third installment. I'm glad to see everyone in a good place. Dick had grown so much since this series began. The fact that he is trying so hard to forgive veronica demonstrates this. And so has Mac, otherwise she would have stayed mad longer at Dicks job offer to Weevil. Listening to the sibling advice was so painful, I just wanted to give Dick a really big hug! Please, please, please continue!
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