Nice twist, I like it!

yeah. I'd like to se Renji's side of this story, his superior (/-s) (brobobly Byakuya) would probably wisit and make an inqury about the man next door. asking about anything odd as they have observed Arrancar leaving the place.

Karin being a yakuza princess and her conversation about Renji with Ichigo, really funny.

Love this story, just a shame it's so short.

Please do more like this with RenIchi.

Aizen got kicked a second time, really nice. Thanks *evil laughter*

AWWWWWWWWWW i loved it! and the whole star crossed lovers thing a happy ending rocks! i think a second chapter would be well worth writing where everyone finds out. but your the writer so it's up to you!

This, was so sweet. I loved it and it was very well written.
Happy Writing DMIB!

Yay for making your own happy ending!
Something very timelessly appealing about giving up all to be with the one you love.
And of course, RenIchi is bonus sweetener.
Thanks for sharing; I enjoyed re-reading this fic!