very interesting AU.
never thought of what would happen if that alliance failed, but i can totally see nami getting caught because she refuses to drop her shoppings.*sweat drops*
that scene in prison was the best by the way.
hmm.. i'm wondering what happened to the stawhats, letting nami stay captured seems so out of character, i don't think it will be anything good.
on the other hand i really want to throttle law.
i like his character, and i can understand that he acts this way because the strawhats didn't make the most stabe and useful allies, but if anybody acted this way towards my friend/navigator/nakama and next wants to say "lets be allies again"..
i don't know if i could stop myself from poisoning their tea and dance on their grave.
well, that's my thoughts.
otherwise i love the nami-law interaction, the powerplay is great, and i liked how you potrayed the atmosphere in the prison, very captivating(haha).
great story!

Love it!
#Enoughsaid

Pretty please update with a cherry on top! I have been following this for a while now and i really, REALLY, REEEAAALLLYYY, want to see what happens next...

Thank you, BlurryFace

This is really interesting! I really like it, but its been a while since your last update, are you still planning to continue this? Please say yes! Hahaha!

This story is amazing. It's very different from all the other LawNa stories Ive read, and while at points I wanted to strangle Law for his idiotic decisions (Even if he thinks he's highly intelligent) I loved this story very much and I encourage you to continue to update because you have a very uhh unique writing style that I never see in other fanfiction works.

Nami's a virgin in this story. Finally. It gets annoying to see Nami as the slutty one in most fanfiction works and I'm tired of always seeing her boobs on display for horny dudes and I honestly want to thank you for making this story seem realistic (in a way.)

I love how Law thinks he understands Luffy. Not even Luffy's own crewmmates understand him exactly.

Kudos to the person who beta'd your story. That person did an amazing job.

I hope you continue this story some day, even though its been a year since you last updated.

Ahhh. This was a very stressful read - in a positive way though. I find it difficult to accept Law acting as such especially given the current circumstances in the manga and it pains me because betrayal from him after everything he and the Straw Hats had gone through must be really painful and frustrating for Nami.

Given that, I think this is very well written. The story just flows and is able to provoke a lot of emotions from me as well as keep me interested for future development. I really like how you write both Law and Nami and I'd really want to see how they will progress as characters along with the plot.

Interesting plot you cooked up.
It's nice to see those two shine.

"You didn't just waltz in and take over the New World because you felt like it."

Hah, poor Law. He only thinks he understands Luffy.

I like that the arc this story is based on still isn't finished, despite you starting this a little over two years ago.

Waiting with anticipation,

Noyb

i really like this fic. i want to see the different ways law will torture nami. bwahahaha! hope you post the next chapter soon :)

agh! we'll see what's next of this...

HEY! YOU'RE BACK! THANK GOODNESS YOU'RE BACK! ;D
it's just amazing that it's been a really long while since i visited ...like i can hardly remember...um...feb or march...and i'd kindda lost my unlimited access on my phone so i've been checking out stuff online like once only per week and for a limited time sooooo...there are times that i kind of neglected this site...so here it is, i had the chance to check the site and...BOOM! fresh update fro you! YAH! X)
HAHAH!
i'm so sorry for my long blab about this and that, super explaining and all...hahaha! anyways...AGGGGHHHHHH! I missed LaNa! so much that i missed your story...
any update of the story would be welcomed dearly by your followers...you never lost it, you know, still there...though a bit short yeah, but hell, i don't mind...since Nami is also "back"! and (and i kindah lost there a bit since its been so long so i had to browse back on previous chaps..hehhe)...i like the check-up scene..geeheehhee...brings back my giddiness on fangirling which i'd left hanging for a while...
i so very much anticipate of what will gonna happen next, now that Nami "agreed" and how will she be able to come out of this predicament...or would she be? and WHat is it that Law would want to do with her to AMUSE him?
gaaaaaaaaahhh...i won;t say update soon...just update... and take care! :)
(had i thanked you for the update...? ;)

Thanks for updating! :) The wait was worth it. Well, I'm liking how things are progressing so far! Glad to see Nami's staying true to her sneaky, sharp self by devising an escape plan already, though this is Law she's up against but I still think he won't know what hit him. Law's perspective is spot on despite him being a difficult character to understand. And yep, Luffy does a good job of being a walking trouble magnet, I won't be surprised if his name appears on the front page of that newspaper.

I'm so glad your back, and with all my heart I really wish for you the best :)
Thanks for the update, the wait was finally worth it! I guess all that's left to say is I hope to be reading more soon XD

Oh, so good to see you back!

Don't worry, this was a very enjoyable chapter. It's never really so much about the length but the content of chapters that make them truly enjoyable and worth the wait. I loved the little peek into Traffy's thoughts and the situation Nami found herself in. Law seems to be having the upper hand now but I wonder how her stay on board of Law's submarine will play out. Although there is no romance involved here (which, admittedly, I am a bit sad about lol), the dialogues and 'chemistry' between them are quite fun to read about.

Will be looking forward to more awesome chapters! :)

A.S.A

So happy you updated!
Still irksome that the people back at Impel Down have something as important as Nami's heart, but I am getting really into this story and where it goes :D

Great job on your revisions after our last run through the draft. :) The scenes flowed into each other at a good pace; the introspection wasn't dragging, in my opinion, and I think that's a very good thing!

Law's being an ass, as usual. XD So kudos for consistency. And Nami is wonderfully stubborn, your fic is making me love her more and more with every chapter.

On technical aspects, I saw some typos (...was atrocious andgenerally...[and some others that I can't get to right now because my browser wouldn't let me highlight and copy passages for some reason]). There were parts where the tense shifted from past to present, but they're debatable because I myself can't decided if they should necessarily be changed or if they're okay the way they are.

I think the sentence divisions are done well in this chapter. [Soon enough I probably won't even be mentioning this. XD] There are some punctuations I have issues with, but, again, they're debatable, as I feel like you had used them for your own preference in pacing.

Overall, I loved this chapter. :) I can't help but feel happy that Nami's out of Impel Down; girl needed the break. (And no, Law won't even be a deterrent. Xd)