It was great, but I think not enough heartbreak, or maybe I just don't have a heart to be broken.

His name is Kuro not fucking blacky

Crying this is so sad

i'm gonna get in trouble for crying in class! Thanks a lot! No, but this is seriously amazing.

I'm sitting in class right and trying my HARDEST not to start crying right now Goddammit. HELP

Holy shit why you do this to me this made me cry so much

*CRYING MY EYES OUT*

*sniff* Was so sad...

But still good!

I think I'll just curl up in a corner and cry now.

I liked it, pretty good.

Sad! but I liked it :)

For some reason i felt like my chest buzzed every time i breathed when i read this. Then, just after the story ended, i fainted and was taken to a hospital. Turns out i had gotten sick and didnt even realize it. Great story! Think i cried.

"Rin the did an up the street cut. He selthed his sword and let his hands and arms fall limp."

What is that supposed to mean?

Other than, that, beautifully written. Getting better so fast! But you really should change the summary into something different. Maybe...

Rin is in love with Bon, but just because Rin is the son of Satan, he's turned down. Falling apart dangerously fast, Rin finally breaks.

Then, you should put a warning, like, Character Death.

Just a suggestion. :)

Thank you for making me cry myself to sleep over this beautiful piece of fanfiction