That was great. Thank you

Okay, so, I’m a few years late. Oh well? At least I stumbled across this wonderfully written story and got to enjoy it! I’ll try to keep this short since I highly doubt you’ll ever see it, but we’ll see. First, thank you so SO much for writing! The plot, the writing, the character portrayal, the dialogue, everything just seems so well thought out. You’ve turned this into a beautiful story, and I loved every second of reading it! Thanks so so much, you are truly a gifted writer, and an amazing person for sharing this story! Thanks again, I appreciate it! (See, I didn’t make this TOO long. It’s beginning to be a bit ramble ‘cause of this side note, but oh well 3)

Oh my god. I was holding back my emotions in all the other chapters. But the “they saw me” killed me. Absolutely annihilated me. I cried happily.

aww

0w0

I was totally keeping it together until the " hey look at that im crying" line came along
You desearve a medal

Does NOBODY notice tire tracks of Motercycles?! Seriously? Anybody?

Ooof. That's all I gotta say on this chapter.

Causing ppl pain on purpose. Just why?

Ugh. I get sooo annoyed with Pitch. I mean, he plays smart but he uses his brains for harming others.

Aaaaauuuuuuugggggggghhhhhhhhh!
I don't usually review, but this story is too amazing not to! (I already finished it). I feel so bad for Jack! I have siblings too who live with a different family, and even though they know I exist, they don't know our relationship, and I rarely see them. I know how Jack feels, and it's pretty rough. Amazing writing, though! I loved this story!

I'm reading this for the second time and the last few chapters still make me cry...this is one of the best fics I've read and definitely the best RotG AU! Thank you for writing this!

I love it! Never read the original, but I definitely liked that Bunny’s last name was Wilder, and I’m glad Jack didn’t cry more lol. This was very very well written

Lol the last sentence. I love irony

I'm actually crying reading this