"Did I make Sub Zero seem weak"
Considering Sub Zero and Scorpion were always equals, yes.

Hello, author! I really liked your fanfic

Can I translate it into Russian?

-scorpion- _scorpia_

(For some reason ffnet won't let me post this from my acct)

I know exactly what you mean LOL I wrote From A Woman's POV when I was in highschool, and I really had to force myself to finish it, since my interests and writing style changed drastically since I started it. Until now I have lots of unfinished stories, mostly because it's been a long time since I updated, and I kind of forgot what I was planning to do with it.

Still, I enjoyed Womanizer while it lasted. I really wanted to write this concept, but I didn't have any inspiration. So I'm super glad when you decided to write it. Thanks for making this fic happen! :)

- natashaheisenburg

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease finish this i love this story to bits

O god my baby is dead. Why would you do that? What did Tomas ever do to you? Jesus take the wheel, my feels. also wtf Sub Zero? Your a fuckin idiot.

Wtf wtf wtf does smoke is yandere

I can feel the awkward adrenaline rush of "shit just hit the fan in THE most colossal way" coming from smoke, my dude.

Quan Chi x Shao Khan? The fuck? I understand Ermac and Kenshi, Liu Kang and Kung Lao, HELL even Johnny Cage and Raiden has some sense to it, but Quan Chi is fuccci forever.

pleeeeeeeeeeeeease keep going i've been watching this story for almost a year now always coming back to see if you updated it please finish this i love this story.

Yeahhhhh finally an update! I had missed this story.

OHMYGOD. YOU'RE BACK. IM SO EXCITED. I READ BOTH UPDATES SO QUICKLY I KEPT SQUEALING. HELP. BUT ALSO WHY. WHY DID YOU KILL SMOKE. PLZ. ((this just makes me want to update my own fanfic lol))

*GASP* Nooooo! Not Smoke! Awww man :(

Ugh, Quan Chi. Just had to open his big mouth. Well, at least Scorpion got his revenge in MKX.

With that being said, I'm really happy to see this updated. (Smoke isn't really dead is he?)

Love, Oblivion'schild... fanfiction wouldn't let me review while logged in!?

SOBS. Oh gods the feels! How could you kill that innocent cinnamon roll! But you know I'm bias XD Anyway! I loved it! And hated it! But that's what makes it so wonderful!
I do feel like the end was rushed a bit and the fighting could have been dragged out a bit more (to provide extreme sadness and crushing emotional damage), but that's just because I didn't want such a good chapter to ever end! I shall be satisfied once another chapter is complete! AND ONLY THEN! Love you always babe! Keep writing!