Her brother is really cold and rather cruel. I hope he never becomes king with such a disposition.

I really enjoyed this story, it was well written and I liked Katie McGrath as the face actress. She's a great actress and it was easy to imagine her as Adrianna. Thank you!

I love the idea of a fairy in the world of middle earth. Eager to read this.

hahaha finally!

These last chapters are much better than the previous ones, in my opinion. I have got to know more about the personality of Adrianna, what are her thoughts and generally, is not just a transcript of the movies, which I have read it so many times that I just skip it, looking for what is different in your story.

Couldn't she get bigger to break the glass?

I find quite cute to have a fairy in the fellowship. However I am quite confused about this Faye race that you created, as mythical creatures have many variations, I don't know what to expect. Are they immortal?, what kind of magic do they have? Do fayes use weapons to fight or magic? I would have liked more of that in the introduction of the story.
The fact that Tobias is ill, instead of injured makes me think that these Fayes are not immortal like elves. But I am guessing there..
Why did you went with Greek names? (actually I am not sure if they are greek) I found it curious. I liked the names anyway (adrianna sounds beautiful) but I do not think they connect well with the british style of the LOTR universe.
I am going to keep reading now :)

I love this story! I don't think she's spoiled at all, there's a difference between someone spoiling you by giving you everything you want (like her father did) and actually being an obnoxious spoiled brat. Flamers back off, let the writer write! One thing though, the ship with elves did set sail four years after the Ring was destroyed, but that was only the ship with Gandalf, Galadriel, Frodo, etc. Legolas actually stayed in Middle Earth for almost another hundred years, until Aragorn died. Then he and Gimli set sail together. Gimli was the only dwarf ever given that honor (yay! They're such cute friends!). But yeah, your story didn't stray from the original plot there, so don't worry. I love it though!

I wont lie, it felt like after the war of the ring you kinda were lost on what to write about and the chapters got shorter and made less plot sense. But it was a fun read and i liked the original idea behind it so i will give it a fave.

I really did enjoy your story up until this point really. It has a great storyline and ideas. However, your character seems to get weaker as you get further along. I don't know if it was your aim or not but I would have expected her to become stronger, less bratty and less dependant in way. Like at the beginning she seemed like a very strong fighter but it seems it has regressed as she went along in the journey and usually the reverse happens.
I don't mean to offend you its just how I feel about how the story has gone. Otherwise the first two thirds was very good and I did thoroughly enjoy reading it.

yup. ignore flames.
those who can't do, criticize.

I'm not even going to bother reading this story anymore... the fact that people have tried to help you even though it is in the form of a flame denying people to review is useless... plus your character although has potential I can't get over the fact that she was jealous of Lady Galadriel, are you serious?

Cool story. I'm on chapter 4. I love the fact that it is sort of eventual. I mean Legolas and Adrianna's relationship. It pisses me off cause in most Legolas fanfics I've read, they hook up after saying a few words to each other.

Hope you update soon.

And she's turned back into a spoilt brat... Can we send her on another quest... Please?