Nicely told. Sweet ending.

I love this! Thank you so much for making this incredible story!

Excellent. I like that you added a small epilogue. It rounds out the story; makes it feel more complete. Some of the other stories feel like they ended abruptly. The reader. Is left craving to know what came next.

and they lived happly ever after.

Okay so that was great but I have some critiques. First there were some vernacular issues for the time period such as "baby" being used as a nickname with some of the couples. Also the whole pregnancy thing just threw me way off and I ended up not liking the ending very much. If it had maybe ended with just a wedding or something, I think it might have made me roll my eyes less. But that honestly just my opinion and tastes. I actually super loved all of it leading up to that so awesome job!

Loved it :)

I really love that certain oblivious Prince (although he really makes me frustrated) Thank you for the wonderful stories, if Ygraine is still alive, the story will be so much more fun.

Great story, funny and sweet. Arthur was just so blind. But I have to say, that any parent seeing their child who is an adult, naked is just disturbing. Really disturbing.

I saw the supernatural reference. Sam and Dean hun? I like it. Also I love how much of a BAMF! mother Ygraine is.

OMG IT WAS SO AWESOME!

I am a straight woman but open minded to things. Your is soooooooo good. I feel the love, I feel the hurt for merlin when arthue ridicules him after turning gold colour. Arthus is such an ass. I stumble on this mxm and yaoi thing by accident. I find that stories with a true plot and written so nicely, you know, the words and all, well, I don't mind at all reading it. Beautifully done. Hope you come up with new stories.

What did they name the second kid? I'm really curious. This a really good fic. Nice job.

I LOVED IT SO MUCH!

I must say I absolutely LOVED your story! is nicely written, funny (a few times couldn't stop laughing) and very sweet! Just one thing though.. why making merlin pregnant? that was a disappointment, it was alredy all perfect! but nevertheless this is going straight among my favourites :) write more like this! maybe after the 5x13 ;) thanks!

Like the name draconis I'm a big Harry potter fan