Shades of XF Kill Switch - trailer full of tech. Spooky,

Ok yeah I'm out he can save Mcgee but not that stupid bitch so now she gets to get hurt like always ugh im done with this

I'm not a fan of ziva so if shes been taken like it looks like im gonna stop reading so sick of her getting hurt or kidnapped in every damn fanfic

Ugh that was just completely gross im out that was to off putting

Hey...this is getting a little weird here...but I like it so far. Just color me strange. Thanks for sharing.

Something is off with the camper story. Either McGee has created an AI who can make independent choices or the "camper" is not what McGee says/believes it to be.
It's definitely more than just a super search program, and freaks me out, way more than a potential supervillan-scientist.
It could have been taken over by somebody else, maybe.

I will read on in search of answers.
Good writing btw.

OMG! This is so good! I am addicted to it! Post more like this!

Kind of curious now what that person said because this is one of the best stories I've read in a really long time. I don't watch NCIS often, but from what I can tell you did a great job with character portrayal and more impressive was your ability to really create an image for the reader with your descriptions of what was taking place. Also despite whatever that guest reviewer said they still had to have read every chapter of your story, which I find interesting. I like constructive comments and I love complements, but I think that people who have disrespectful and rude comments are just assholes. You did a great job with this story, I've added it to my favorites and am definitely going to check out more of your stories

Very tense. Good job

Wow, does that mean Tony doesn't see only one possible future but THE future? Doesn't bode well for him with his first vision ... brrrrr.
Good story, nicely written.

Great read..and I did it in a day. Love a Tony with special powers...it'll do wonders for their closure rate! Whatever has happened to Gideon? And what has Abby found out about McGee's device?

Looking forward to more in the Contingency arc...

Argh...NO WAY!

OMG ! Please Write Soon Very Soon... :O O.o Cliffhangers -_-

AWESOME! I'm so glad I came back to this story. I've started reading stories as WIP and been left disappointed when writers never finish them for whatever reason. I've tried to read this in one go but RL has got in the way and I really must leave the couch and go do some work...I shall return and review at the end.

Wonderful story, i'm glad the rest of the team know now. I wonder how safe Tony will be once he returns to work!

To work with me...

Great stuff looking forward to the next story. Thanks