| Reviews for Where there is a Flame |
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  Debora chapter 2 . 3/5/2019 The spirit in the hospital is Death. |
| DreamDancer chapter 9 . 6/4/2018 Hoping, wishing, and searching for this mentioned sequel and excited beyond belief to see if it's as good as it's original. THIS STORY IS AMAZING! |
 Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 3/15/2018 This is a good start! |
| Serendipity989 chapter 2 . 2/15/2018 just thought I'd mention that Toothania can actually speak every language |
| AltairSnow chapter 1 . 2/3/2018 You need a period at the end of every sentence. It's extremely disorienting and annoying when you don't. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/2/2017 More please |
| Christina chapter 3 . 7/6/2017 This story is perfect it shows a family realthionship without fully focusing on it. It also hurts Jack and gets him injured without making him weak. I also like how it keeps the characters in character and uses fire without having a fire powered enemy |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2017 Wow! That's all I can say. The story is definitely spicy:) So, when's the next chapter coming up? Can't wait! |
| narutofanficlov321 chapter 9 . 10/17/2016 NEEDS SEQUEL SO BAD LOVED IT |
| DOCTORSINTHETARDIS chapter 9 . 6/5/2016 AHHHHHHH Y the cliffie?! !? |
| Natsuki D chapter 9 . 5/21/2016 Is the sequel out yet? Can't wait for more •/ Love the story |
| Cherrycola chapter 2 . 3/13/2016 Is it Pitch Black? |
| WhiteTigerYay chapter 8 . 3/9/2016 This is really good! I love your writing style:) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/16/2016 Oh please tell me there is a sequal for this |
| narutovsitachi6 chapter 7 . 11/8/2015 jeez, Gabriel is kind of a jerk, just because jack saved a close friend he gets a harm threat from Gabriel "just because jack did a job meant for a saint. other then that, I love the story |
