I love how dark you made christmas for them. I noticed one spelling error towards the end, but other than that it was very good.

I loved the way you used the Christmas atmosphere from the house they had broken in, and yet mixed it in with the torture ;) the musician metaphor was nicely handled as well. Loved the interaction between the Dark Lord and Bellatrix. very nice ;)

Really Evil Christmas :D I don't know why, but I almost laughed sometimes :)
Keeeep writing!

Sincerely,
hervissa